I Am On High Alert

I am asked for the access code that will expire 15 minutes after
behind the curtains 
someone is nervously tapping their foot on the floor
creaking
I'm waiting in my imaginary world,
even though I haven't been for a long time
I created my reasons and opinions
if longing cannot create spaces in between
then who creates so much space between the suspension points..
with them it's all clear...
those who are healing will need
room to rest
if
their last words were not:
God, how do I step over this maze?!
maybe they still haven't decided which labyrinth would be preferred
in the place of greenery too many shadows been gathered
some walk in their hands
some walk in their heads
others walk in their soul
if I tell someone else the password of my imaginary
world, 
after which ellipsis points
will got hit by the
REALITY?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 8/28/2023 8:05:00 PM
This is a very interesting poem.
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Elena Mihalachi
Date: 8/29/2023 1:17:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 8/28/2023 6:38:00 PM
Give me the code Elena to your mazey crazy world. Sounds like a blast!
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Elena Mihalachi
Date: 8/29/2023 12:59:00 AM
Oh, thank you! <3
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