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I Am Number Four

Mine is a connection twix body and soul Beliefs based on values, the earth as a whole; In league with creation of moon and the stars, To strings am related on tenor guitars. In marriage enable the vows to confirm Ensure that relations in love will stay firm. Extend pragmatism in fields of mystique Approach every challenge with focused technique Directing attention in moments of stress To angels who show you the way to success. I came from a planet to keep hopes alive; Of Garde am a number between three and five. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Contest: What’s in a Number Sponsored by Juliet Ligon Placed 1st © 7th February 2020

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/25/2022 9:16:00 AM

Hello Paul. Hi. I turned to this entry at random because of your title and that I am the fourth child out of five. First, I was impressed with your poetic expression and execution. This is one of those entries that mus be read out loud. Truly. Second, if the reader reads your entry in reverse it also makes sense with clarity. It did to me. Both aspects is a tribute to your skill. It was an honor turning to your page today. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful weekend. Blessings...

Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/21/2020 4:21:00 PM

Beautifully expressed, Paul. I think everyone should read this and hopefully learn a thing or two. Sometimes I believe I'm from another planet also ;)

Paul Callus
Date: 11/24/2020 2:01:00 AM

Thank you for the pleasant remarks, Angela; as always, your visits are appreciated :) Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/5/2020 3:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Enjoy your day and win..........

Paul Callus
Date: 3/6/2020 1:26:00 PM

Thank you, Paula:) Enjoy the weekend. Regards // paul

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 3/1/2020 7:34:00 AM

Congrats on your win!! Well done.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/2/2020 5:59:00 PM

Thank you, Krish. All the best // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 2/29/2020 7:22:00 PM

dropping back with my congratulations Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 3/2/2020 6:00:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Hugs & goodnight. // paul

Juliet Ligon

Date: 2/29/2020 6:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my "What's In A Number" contest! Nice personification. I'd never even considered marriage vows requiring four, but two witnesses are required. Creative example along with the others.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/2/2020 6:02:00 PM

Thank you, Juliet! Placing first in your contest made my day:) Also thank you for the prompt-inspiration. Goodnight // paul

John Watt

Date: 2/29/2020 6:48:00 PM

Paul, enjoyed the read and your impeccable rhyme and meter - congratulations on your top placement in Juliet's contest ~ John

Paul Callus
Date: 3/2/2020 5:58:00 PM

Pleased you enjoyed it, John; thank you on all counts. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/21/2020 9:36:00 AM

My favorite number is 4 - if ever a buy any kind of raffle ticket it is always number 4 - Your rhythm and rhyme is an absolute joy and your terrific poetry an honor to read. Warm regards and hugs Paul, Jennifer.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/22/2020 6:48:00 AM

Thank you, Jenny. Your feedback and lovely complimentary remarks are appreciated. Warm regards and hugs // paul

Edlynn Nau

Date: 2/12/2020 12:40:00 PM

Fun couplets and you know I ADORE poetry that rhymes the most!. This was so much fun. What made you decide you were 4? Is it your favorite number? Mine are 3, 8, and 16. I’d have a chore with this exercise (ha ha). Good Luck on this one & I bet it was fun to write!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2020 1:15:00 PM

Hi Edlynn...such a pleasure to have you visiting after your sabbatical! I know you love rhyme, even though it appears like you're now trying your hand at free verse:) I did not choose no4. The Sponsor asked us to write a poem about the number four without using the word "four" in the poem. My fav nos are 3, 5, 7. Best regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 2/11/2020 9:16:00 AM

That is you, a person with religious values and hopes, a kind person with a creative mind. Good luck in the contest. Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 2/11/2020 3:09:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely feedback, Eve. Warm regards // paul

Brenda Chiri

Date: 2/10/2020 9:54:00 PM

Paul you are always a joy to read!;)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/11/2020 3:17:00 PM

Thank you, Brenda :) All the best // paul

Anil Deo

Date: 2/10/2020 1:08:00 PM

What's in a number? Memorable lines and Number 4 leaves enough space for 3 Persosn of belief, masters of History and Mystery: Father, Son, Holy Spirit. Shalom -shalom Paul. (Focused technique will be my M.O. here on.) warm regards

Anil Deo
Date: 2/13/2020 9:05:00 PM

thanks for the info, Paul. The number three, because of the Trinity, always connected to goodness & grace. Now I know 333 specifically. shalom shalom Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2020 10:39:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by, Anil. Did you know that 333 applies to special messages from your guardian angel?:) Regards & Peace // paul

Silent One

Date: 2/9/2020 7:57:00 AM

Great choice for a number. I like how it rhymes and flows...

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2020 8:26:00 AM

Thank you, S-1; pleased that you liked it. Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/8/2020 3:13:00 PM

Your poem contains some good advice for all of us, Paul. I like the way you describe how the angels watch over us as we make decisions, especially redirecting focus in times of stress. Deep and quite profound, Paul. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2020 8:22:00 AM

Thank you for the insightful and encouraging comments, Carolyn. Hope you are keeping well. Hugs // paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/7/2020 6:38:00 PM

G'day Paul … a wonderful poem to read Paul with the flow and rhyme. Do you a great job with your poetic verses - thank you Paul - Lindsay

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2020 1:52:00 PM

Thank you for a pleasant visit, Lindsay. All the best...and thank you for your posts which always elicit a smile. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/7/2020 4:51:00 PM

This is spot on Paul! Excellent use of rhyme to celebrate your number. I love this entry. I hope it takes top honors! Please share this with PFT. My husband is into numerology and it is very accurate. xxoo

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2020 1:51:00 PM

Thank you for the generous feedback and complimentary remarks, Connie...Truly appreciated! Warm regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/7/2020 2:52:00 PM

You have everybody talking about #4--glad you explained it in response to a comment below--I see the connection in your words. All the best, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2020 1:44:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I think explanations were in order sincere many would not know the connection between no 4 and what I wrote! Here's one more hint: "Garde refers to the 'guardians' in the film 'I am no 4'." Regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 2/7/2020 1:46:00 PM

What a read, Paul! I like so much reading numerology.. and I so often relate to their readings! I'm not surprised of your numerology number reading.. that's how I see you! A soul connected to people by the strings of Love.. kindness.. insight and values.. A great poet who "approaches every challenge with focused technique"! An amazing poem! A wonderful rendition! and an immense pleasure to read! My deepest regards and blessings to you.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2020 1:40:00 PM

Thank you for the very insightful comments, and I love your reasoning, Besma:) Always a pleasure to read what you have to say; your write with a sincere pen; much appreciated, my friend. ~ Warm regards & Blessings // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/7/2020 12:38:00 PM

- I'm seven :) - A great poem, Paul - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/7/2020 1:28:00 PM

:):) Thank you Anne-Lise. Have a lovely weekend:) Hugs [Here's one more hint: "No.4 connects mind-body-spirit with the physical world of structure and organization. It symbolizes a solid foundation of values and beliefs." // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 2/7/2020 11:46:00 AM

You certainly did your research Paul I am not familiar with numerology and enjoyed your poem:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 2/7/2020 1:20:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Here is another hint: "In the 4th day of the Creation God created the sun, as well as the moon and the stars." Regards & Hugs // paul

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/7/2020 11:38:00 AM

love your clever take on the number 4...I am not familiar with numerology but I like this write... best wishes in the contest :) hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 2/7/2020 1:11:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra; pleased you enjoyed:) Here is another hint: "No 4 indicates that angels are around you and they're ready to help, guide and assistance whenever needed." ~ Warm regards // paul

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/7/2020 10:23:00 AM

I like the style of the write...the creation

Paul Callus
Date: 2/7/2020 12:27:00 PM

Thank you, Arturo. Here is another hint: "Number 4 has a strong connection with love and it is usually a symbol of stability." // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/7/2020 10:11:00 AM

Wow, interesting. You did well with this Paul. You have us all thinking :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/7/2020 12:22:00 PM

Thank you Heidi. I shall now start dropping a hint about No4 in each reply:) "I Am Number Four is a 2011 American teen science fiction action film."

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/7/2020 9:53:00 AM

I may have to study up on numerology. I like the poem, I just don't get where the 4 comes in. Paul, this one is a little above my pay grade.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/7/2020 10:07:00 AM

I too had to get a crash course on numerology, Danny, though I cheated a bit....only studied no 4 :) Thank you for stopping by, my friend. // paul

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/7/2020 9:12:00 AM

You answered the challenge masterfully Paul! This one has me at a total loss. My best to you in the contest, xomo

Paul Callus
Date: 2/7/2020 9:59:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen. I followed the Sponsor's instructions and made use of search machines :) Warm regards // paul