I Am Numb

Don't ask me how I think, don't ask me how I feel, don't ask for explanations I am numb. Don't raise insightful queries or try to coax replies, it's not that I don't hear you; I am numb. Don't ask me what the time is or what I'd like to eat, I hardly know what day it is, I am numb. Don't ask me in-depth questions or even something light, you're best off leaving well alone, I am numb. Don't try to make me ponder, the process only hurts, just let my brain go back to sleep I am numb. It's not that I am shallow or that nothing lies within, it's just that I can't reach it....... I am numb.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/31/2011 12:11:00 PM
Yes Im sure must of us have been in your seat at one time or another.. But the sun does shine... excellent write... Michael
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Date: 12/31/2011 8:16:00 AM
wow i am numb too read my poem bliss lol i think my poem feels the same way this poem feels
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Date: 12/30/2011 10:11:00 PM
The dentist must have injected too much Novocain in your gums. Good writing that also reminds me a bit of a song by Pink Floyd.
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Date: 12/30/2011 4:24:00 PM
Been there..Good topic and presentation..Sara
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Date: 12/30/2011 12:07:00 PM
life gets you like this sometimes. the beauty of poetry is that we can at least express ourselves. i like this in a sad way.
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Date: 12/30/2011 10:38:00 AM
Ooohoohoo! Been there and done that my friend. I wrote one called "I've Changed" that sort of goes along the same line. A fine write . Nice to meet you. God Bless, JB
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