Amber Underwood Poet Free verse

I Am Not Alice

I followed you
       Like Alice  
     And the bunny
           I fell 
        And fell
        Deeper
     Into this dark hole
           I felt
         And felt
         Deeper
         For you
     But you were
          Always
     Rushing to some place
     That doesn't include me
           I tried
        And tried
      To stay sane
      I seen the mad hatter
      I understood
        Exactly what 
       I had become
       I'm sorry but
      I am not Alice
         Anymore

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Tim Smith April 9, 2014 at 1:55 PM Congratulations on your beautiful; winning poem Amber

David Mohn April 9, 2014 at 11:33 AM Congrats Amber...great content and nice use of the descending verse

Paul Callus April 9, 2014 at 11:13 AM Deserved win Amber with a worthy strong poem. // congrats. // paul

Sara Kendrick April 9, 2014 at 10:59 AM Great wining work.Congrats..Sara

Richard Lamoureux April 9, 2014 at 9:35 AM Brilliant piece, I love the feel of this one. Congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta April 9, 2014 at 9:29 AM A wonderful poem, congrats on the win, Amber

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 9, 2014 at 8:51 AM Amber this is a wonderful poem ! Congrats on well deserved top placement !

Poet Destroyer A April 9, 2014 at 3:39 AM AMBER, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest...:) LINDA

Verlena S. Walker April 9, 2014 at 2:53 AM Amber, CONGRATULATIONS! First place is a wonderful place to be... smiles and hugs Verlena