I Am Not a Warrior

I am not a warrior My skin is pale and soft I am not the kindest spirit My words can hurt you to the bone I am not purest serenity I am fragile and unwhole but my eyes own warm expressions of a giving, caring soul. A soul so weak and strong sensitive and true A conflict , a fine sentiment of what's right or wong to do I am not a warrior My skin is pale and soft I am not the kindest spirit but there's sweetness in my song Unveiled I came to your arms No secret in-between You walked through all my valleys and alleys I have been All I was I have shared with you Who I'm not and who I am You touched my heart You've seen it all Cloaked with gossamer and bare. I am not a warrior My skin is pale and soft I'm not the kindest spirit my words can hurt you to the bone But I am who I am I am human ,I am real I have loved you and embraced you till lips turned cold and still Because doubts created darkness silent teardrops and more fear Like no warrior but with starlight All my battles I would win.
Inspired by the song 'Warrior' By Amber
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 31, 2016 at 3:27 PM
A truly inspired poem, Charma. The essence of a soul revealed by critical self-examination. You went to a place most try to avoid. Painful truths helps a person to grow beyond their limitations. A stunning, and honest poem. Kudos. Happy New Year. Love and best wishes.
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 7:32 PM
wow, this is quite wonderful and unique, Charma. CAn't believe I ever missed it. I love how you think, lady!!! SEVEN
P  Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 5:49 AM
Your ink wields much strength Charmaine, you are a warrior of a particular type, the best kind, a poetess. :)
Callus Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 10:14 AM
You are a different kind of warrior, Charm...one who fights for what is right and fair. You 'fight' to keep the peace, always ready to help with kind and encouraging words. Your strength is found within! Such a lovely poem...glad it was inspired by a Maltese singer:) Regards // paul
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December 1, 2016 at 6:02 PM
Hi Charma, I beg to differ. You are a warrior of a different kind. Your strength comes from the love you have for your fellow man. Excellent write. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
Manassian Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 4:02 PM
You are the best kind of warrior....a warrior with a heart soft and supple. We need to fight for what we believe in. This is an exceptional piece, my dear. You are so talented. I'm in awe...I mean that...truly! Love and hugs
Ball Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Beautifully done Charmaine. Plainly spoken with great emotion. Loved it. God Bless, JB
Leake Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 6:19 AM
Written like a true warrior Charmaine, Another fine write from you!! Best Wishes Kevin
Vaso Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 8:41 PM
If you were a painter, this would be your self portrait, beautiful!
Teaser Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 4:36 PM
Love it. it brings colour into a black and white world..
Chircop Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 7:33 PM
Thanks keith.Welcome to poetrysoup.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 4:14 PM
in your pen flowed the warrior of grace charmaine excellent piece i pray you have a blessed week pal
Chircop Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Thanks for reading Liam.Prayers are always appreciated.: )
Green Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 2:51 PM
Written from a heart that is strong in conviction yet soft in a nurturing way. One who tells it like it is while whispering what can be. There is definitely a conflict in these words but together they create one spirit, one heart and one person who is herself and so much to many other. Beautiful written Charmaine, I could hear this being sung from a balcony overlooking the sea.
Chircop Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Thankyou for reading Chris and for your beautiful comment.
Smith Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 2:39 PM
A very beautiful poem Charma. Soft but strong...I really like the refrain...a fave
Chircop Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Thanks for the fave. Tim. Oh you remember Amber..and the song? : ) Glad you liled it.
Smith Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 2:42 PM
I had to go listen...now I remember her from Eurovision
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