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I Am Not a Ghost

Under my clock whose time is froze Resides a flock of restless crows Restless myself I walk with woes As if I hurt my head And by itself a door would close To my room that's ahead My room has secrets no one knows With walls of wood and black windows The eerie feel of darkness blows Her blouse upon my bed Between the night she comes and goes And I believe she's dead Rime Couee 7-3-11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/28/2011 8:36:00 PM
Hey Steven, You and I should creep together! You should write more of these as this is really good!
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Date: 7/13/2011 3:52:00 AM
I love this, it's playful and dark at the same time.
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:49:00 AM
Wow, that is just fantastic, I could really feel the words flow through me as I read them, and the last line gave me chills. Great job!
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Date: 7/8/2011 12:09:00 AM
Wow, so deep.. I could feel the words as i read them!
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Date: 7/7/2011 12:55:00 PM
Wow, Johnny, awesome writing in a challenging form. I got chills reading it. Surely a winner in Dr. Ram's contest! Love,Carolyn
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Date: 7/4/2011 7:05:00 PM
THANK YOU so much with the compliments you've given to me and to my works,....hopefully,...I'll be one on the winners' list.... tahnks a lot again...well-appreciated...^_^junjun
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Date: 7/3/2011 8:41:00 PM
I so agree with Linda-Marie....great work.
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Date: 7/3/2011 4:06:00 PM
spooky emotion with romantic lace touch Johnny... great build up with crescendo to the finale luv.. awesome write.. happy 4th..
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