I Am Me

I am me Victim, survivor. Prey and predator. Weak yet strong, Anxious but outraged. You are not me, You cannot feel my pain Or walk my path. For you are you. The only me is the reflection the mirror presents. The only me is MY soul, MY feelings, MY skin. Do not pretend to know me. Do not assume you know my fear. Instead just listen. Support without judgement. Commit to raising change. For I am me… And you… Are you.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/14/2019 5:09:00 PM

Hello Alunamda Yokwe, so nice to meet you. That is right, the only person you can be is you. have a nice evening my friend.

Edward Orozco

Date: 1/27/2019 10:29:00 AM

Well written. Only we know who we are and what we fee. Welcome to the soup! Looking forward to reading more of you!

Alunamda Yokwe
Date: 1/28/2019 12:23:00 AM

Hi, many thanks for the feedback, and the welcome

Gareth James

Date: 1/22/2019 11:37:00 AM

You ask for feedback? The only feedback you need is to keep going and don't give up x

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/22/2019 5:25:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Alunamda. I love this poem but especially am fond of this part because it is the best wisdom anyone can give anyone: "Instead just listen. Support without judgement." Very few people know this, and even when they do, they fail to implement it in its purity.

Alunamda Yokwe
Date: 1/22/2019 7:53:00 AM

Hi, Caren I am new to writing poetry and I have finally picked up the courage to share what I've written. Any feedback is appreciated to help me grow so thanks for the comment ??