I Am, I See

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I Am, I see, I feel, love throb within Each moment in time, ignition begins Vibrant and aglow, no trace of ennui Childlike heart embarks on a joyful spree Nestled in calm tranquil, presence sanguine Purity of being, each touch virgin Abode of love, heart, so we dwell therein As a bliss mist, thus we are, thus we be I Am, I see Love suffused magnetism, life underpins Bliss bursts from within, we feel on our skin Divine love leads the way and mind agrees No murmurs arise, to the contrary Under shade of love tree, am free of sin I Am, I see 20-July-2021

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/21/2021 6:41:00 PM

Love the refrain with which you have framed this wonderful poem, Seeker. Thanks, gw

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/21/2021 11:33:00 PM

I like the Rondeau form, gets in a natural rhythm. Happy you dropped by, Gershon!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/19/2021 9:58:00 PM

I An: God's name given to Moses. Its power is seen in the garden of Olives. Good for you if you can see.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/21/2021 11:32:00 PM

The flame still flickers …