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I am Happiness

I am Happiness, you all ardently seek.
I stay elusive from many of your grasp.
With my talisman, I make hearts bright that are bleak.
If grown selfish, I will slip off your clasp.
Won’t board with the haughty, but the meek.

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2024

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Jennifer Proxenos Date: 8/25/2024 7:38:00 AM You are happiness because whenever you write and post a poem or you comment so beautifully with an awesome comment ,you make my heart happy. YOU write so wisely in this QUAINTAIN, i love ' I stay eluisive from many of your grasp, If grown selfish, I will slip of your clasp.' Hugs and blessings sweet friend Valsa. Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 8/22/2024 2:51:00 AM I believe so, that you are happiness and a ray of light; that keeps so many hearts warm, you have that aura and can feel that through your poetry too! I think those around you in real life too must be very lucky too! I hope oneday i get to see you sweet valsa! Love your rhymes here and how youv written for this contest. Best wishes. Always Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 8/19/2024 10:47:00 AM Hello Valsa, A beautiful poem. I enjoyedc tjhis poem. Hugs. /Darlene/ Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 8/19/2024 9:44:00 AM Nice happiness poem. Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 8/19/2024 5:07:00 AM Dear Valsa, I am happy after reading your poem on happiness. I loved your insights into the nature of happiness, which is not just a fleeting emotion but a state of being that requires certain virtues to be sustained. I really believe that you laid it out so well as an elusiveness and a desire, a transformation and a hope and a selfishness along with humility. Excellent! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply