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I Am Grey

Is grey a colour
I’m not sure
It’s the way I look
Next to her

She is vibrant
Yes technicolor 
I’m just her shadow 
She’s like no other

Don’t get me wrong
I can’t complain
A flower can’t thrive
Without the rain.


Not for Andrea’s contest but is inspired by it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/13/2025 5:01:00 PM
well done, sir. Hard for me to choose my color for the poem because so many came to mind. This one is captivating, especially the last three lines. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2025 10:23:00 PM
Thanks Sarah.
Date: 8/13/2025 1:13:00 PM
nice one, richard! the ending is perfect!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2025 2:31:00 PM
Thanks Ilene.
Date: 8/12/2025 10:17:00 PM
Nice rhyme. Very creative. Good rhythm and flow. Enjoyed.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2025 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Frank.

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