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August-15- 2025

Imagine Yourself as a Color Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich


 

I am Green

I hide beneath oceans deep where mysteries peep. I dwell amid the arching spectrum of rainbow hues Some slander and call me ‘green eyed jealousy’ All I do is make this earth cheery to everyone's eyes. I am the harbinger of the burgeoning spring. I’m everywhere, even on a seemingly barren hill top, I’m in trees and grass, crowning and carpeting the land. To ailing spirits, I’m balm. To peasants, I’m hope. I am the lovely garb God gave the earth to wear. Due to misuse, it is now under wear and tear!
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Edmonds  Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 1:54 AM
A lovely poem Valsa, green is the icing God placed on earth for natures survival and our delight… Beryl
Baker Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 9:47 PM
I heard the saying, on God's green earth, Valsa, so you're doing a great job. I think I saw a contest about colors ... good luck if this is an entry for the contest. my friend. Hugs, Bill
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 5:26 PM
As I read your poem, I felt the energy you gave to the color green. How vibrant your words were, rich with imagery. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
Rodgers Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 2:15 PM
Dear Valsa, This one is absolutely radiant and I could feel the green you’re speaking of, not just as a color but as a presence. I love how you gave it personality: hiding in oceans, peeking through the rainbow, misjudged by some as “green-eyed jealousy,” yet quietly bringing cheer wherever it appears. That’s such a clever, lively twist! Blessings, My Dear Valsa, Daniel
Narain Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 12:23 PM
Beautiful poem. Nice to watch greenery around us.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 11:29 AM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Great Picture... Hello Green... I Am Pink... "Good Luck" Have a fun day/weekend writing away..........
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