I Am Done

i am tired
of writing songs
for you

the peak of the
music
crescendos no 
longer

the songs are more
mellow
like a common
country song

by janetta

(comment; i love country songs, but they are more open and uncomplicated).
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pettit Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 12:40 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. You have good simple wording here that has no trouble in conveying clear images to the reader.
Brown Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 9:03 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Janetta. Love, Carol
Loving Iii Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 11:56 AM
wow dude. you just lost your mojo. jhl
Devonshire Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:44 PM
Sometimes the passion fades, Janetta, but I like to think it can be rekindled. And there's nothing wrong with country songs. They may not have the intensity of other musical forms, but they provide comfort and memorable stories. Very nice poem! Best Wishes, Carolyn
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