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04/24/19

Third place

I am crushing on you

Contest by Julie Leigh RodeheaverI 
Sixth place

A Poet's Crush...

Contest by Poet Destroyer A

I am crushing on you ! Impossible to ignore your firm personality alluring attracting me. I am crushing on you Dear! I am almost certain, you won’t hear throbbing beats of my wobbling heart, but I can’t restrain myself being tempted finding immense wealth in your mind. As love is blind, even if you be unkind I am crushing on you, Dear! I am swimming and sinking in dulcet dream. Emotive urge surging, bubbling blood flooding, passion piercing pricking, ardent ardor whirling, I am spinning on axis of non -response, swinging on pivot of confusion. I am crushing on you, Dear! though your inertness is almost clear! 'Almost' means ninety-five percent, as such five percent faint hope is still left. Can't explain 'how?' or why?' But 'Perhaps' may justify! Dream pulls me to soar high. Reality pushes to drown touching abyss causing five percent hope to disappear! Yet, I am crushing on you Dear!

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Date: 10/10/2024 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome work being on the winners' list. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 10/2/2024 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations Anisha! :)
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Date: 10/1/2024 3:13:00 PM
Hi Anisha, Congratulations, thank you for entering my contest. A pleasure to read. Always PD ~LINDA~
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/17/2024 7:26:00 AM
Thanks for visit n appreciation Love
Date: 4/24/2019 4:31:00 PM
I have a big smile at how wonderfully you ended this charming poem Anisha. I hope to see it a top winner. I loved it! : ) xxoo
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 4/24/2019 11:29:00 PM
Thanks Connie for regular support. Love

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