Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Sonnet

I Am Bored With Sex-W

Is there anybody out there anywhere?           
To help to get rid of this tiring sex?
Why the pure love with it we mix ever
Is that not adulterous act excess?

Alas! The death is attached with the birth,
Attached with jealousy is desire's flex.
Morbid rivalry with success and mirth,   
My God, what hidden strings there are in sex!     

The things that smell sweet are often tasteless,        
The things stinking give good taste though chaste less!    
There is a great ray of hope nevertheless,   
That failure is sweeter of things hopeless.     

Why dark, stinking, hairy part alluring?         
 If proven otherwise will quit scribing.              


Dr. Ram Mehta

This is not auto-biographical but about a person I know intimately
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4/22/2011
Form: Sonnet (Pentameter)
Third Place win
Contest: I am bored with___ sponsored by the Sweetheart of PS

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Don Johnson May 24, 2011 at 1:53 AM As we say in Australia sex-bex-n-fourex Interesting working of the words Great win Dr Ram on ya mate Don

Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2011 at 8:51 PM Congratulations with this win, Dr. Ram. Dont' think I had seen this one yet!!

Carol Sunshine Brown May 16, 2011 at 11:01 AM Congratulations Dr.Ram on your win in Linda-Marie's contest. Love,Carol

Cherie Durbin May 14, 2011 at 8:35 AM Good one, Dr. Ram. :) Congratulations on your win!

Joseph Osita May 14, 2011 at 6:27 AM I won't say much since you said it's a person you know.Congrats on your big win in the contest!

Debbie Guzzi May 13, 2011 at 5:40 PM My goodness that person needs a good "shrink" Human is what we are, there are no bad parts, no good parts, we are all just human and love is only love if we love ALL of someone? Congrad's on your win [geeez stinky & hairy YIKE!] Light & Love

Sara Kendrick May 13, 2011 at 11:19 AM Good idea for a work..Congratulations..Sara

Emma Buckeridge May 13, 2011 at 9:03 AM Congratulations :o)

Dr Hitendra Mehta May 13, 2011 at 2:21 AM Many Congrats Dr Ram on 3rd spot in the winners list in Linda's contest with this beautiful depiction of emotions in verse. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Samual Ronthorpe May 13, 2011 at 12:26 AM Good and Bold. Congrats.

Judy Konos May 12, 2011 at 7:57 PM It sounds to me like you're just bored with your partner. Meanwhile remember who made the body...all of it...you'll have time to complain to him before you know it!

John Freeman May 12, 2011 at 4:01 PM Great to see your success Dr Ram with this worthy poem third place. Agape, Moses

Don Johnson May 12, 2011 at 2:23 PM Very good touch of comedy My good Dr Ram the strangest thing us dingalings want women again an again bye mate Don

Jack Horne May 12, 2011 at 12:14 PM I've often wondered where gynaecologists stand sexually... Many congrats on both your latest wins, Dr Ram : )

Carolyn Devonshire May 12, 2011 at 9:19 AM There's too much focus on the act of sex and too little on the feelings behind it, Dr. Ram. Excellent poem! Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards May 12, 2011 at 7:30 AM Congratulations, Dr. Ram, on your success in Linda's contest!!

Brenda Atry May 12, 2011 at 5:18 AM Brilliantly worded Dr. Ram. Your choice of words are perfect! Congratulations. Brenda

Gautami Phookan May 12, 2011 at 4:59 AM You touched a very bold theme here, but handled scrupulously...Congrats Dr Ram on your win..regards, gautami

Tahera Mannan May 11, 2011 at 9:31 PM This is quite an emotional write. Many congrats for this win Dr. Ram

Ralph Taylor May 11, 2011 at 7:30 PM Congrats on a well deserved win, Dr Ram. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 11, 2011 at 6:45 PM Congrats Dr. Ram on your success in my contest ..with this stunning entry so full of truth... thankxx for constant support luv..

Jslambert Mister Roboto April 24, 2011 at 4:22 AM Dark, stinking, Hairy Part! HA! Yes! I do feel for your friend! Please enjoy your Easter Sunday! I have made an egg poem for you and my Soup friends! Please enjoy! ~JSLambert

Judy Konos April 22, 2011 at 4:11 PM The worst I ever had was wonderful!

Stephen Parker April 22, 2011 at 11:47 AM So innate yet so innane! You so deftly qualify and quantify this prurient deed. It is a need for which we all bleed. Enjoyed your rhyme scheme!

Poet Destroyer A April 22, 2011 at 10:30 AM Oi! Enjoyed.. have a nice one..p.d.