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I am bored with mirror

Bored with the mirror reflecting same face, nothing more or less without System Error(500)! Bored with those eyes teasing my behaviour, naughty as they are without a surprise! Bored with those lips 'se_y' someone told, always too much bold and ready for a kiss! Bored with the nose hill above the sea, always ahead of me mimicking my pose! Myself or mirror who is the culprit, let's now fix it whose boredom is more! ©2011 kashinath karmakar ================= Placement:7th (May 2011) By:kashinath karmakar (24th April 2011) Contest:I am bored with -- Sponsor:Linda-Marie The Sweetheart

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Date: 5/23/2011 10:31:00 PM
Your entry was sure cute, Kash,and congrats on it. finally just now getting around to seing the winners.
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations Kashinath on your win in Linda-Marie's contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 2:32:00 AM
Many Congrats Kashinath on big win in Linda's contest with this beautiful depiction of emotions in verse. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/12/2011 4:21:00 PM
Great to see your success Kashinath, with this worthy poem's winner circle presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/12/2011 12:18:00 PM
Many congrats on both your latest wins, Kash : )
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Date: 5/12/2011 9:45:00 AM
So happy to see your poem get well deserved recognition, Kash. Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, kashinath
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Date: 5/11/2011 9:54:00 PM
Good that you are not a girl or this boredom would have created a lot of problems. Many congrats.
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Date: 5/11/2011 8:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kashinath. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/11/2011 6:58:00 PM
Congrats Kash on your success in my contest with this cool entry luv.. thankxx for constant support..
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:56:00 PM
ok, so you have sexy lips, there is nothing wrong with that, Kash. If ya GOT it, FLAUNT it! And say that word.... SEXY!!!!
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Date: 4/25/2011 8:59:00 AM
We always get the same view looking in the mirror, Kash. Some people like looking at their reflections, but I find it boring too. You did a terrific job with the theme. Very original! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2011 4:31:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Kashinath.. good luck.. am certain I will be super amazed by your words and entry ..reading fully at judging time end of May ... have a wonderful week my friend..luv..
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Date: 4/25/2011 12:16:00 AM
dear me, kashi... so playful with great sense of self-deprecation.. amused! winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/24/2011 3:27:00 PM
VERY VERY CLEVER, Kashinath!! What is "se_y" by the way? You did wonderfully coming up with a new topic after I took the word nothing. haha. I want to see your bored with nothing poem too. haha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/24/2011 3:15:00 PM
Cute one that reads like a winners' circle work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by and the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 4/24/2011 7:45:00 AM
Hey Kash, I am doing good thanks and you? ;) hmmm I love the ending of this one.. Cool topic you have chosen as well.. I reckon it might be your story especially with that kissing part lol jk ;) Good luck for the contest
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Date: 4/24/2011 7:00:00 AM
Good morning Kash, how are you?... me smiling at the insights of your poem... the best of luck with your entry... p.d.
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Date: 4/24/2011 5:37:00 AM
May or may not be MY story!!
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