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I am bored with melancholy

I am bored with melancholy This feeling poisons my tongue And keep suggesting me I am wrong I am trapped in deep agony, a sensation that I am living in treachery, when words are touching me like a sad song, as hope is telling me to move on headstrong I am bored with melancholy When our love burns all the obstacles, melancholy strives to knock me out It paints my world to a deep brown color and severely suggests me to wear spectacles so that I can perceive the real feelings sprout Melancholy forces me to soar higher and higher Désirée Meunier

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/23/2011 10:41:00 PM
I have felt this way a few times. NOT fun. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations Desiree on your win in Linda-Marie's contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 2:36:00 AM
Many Congrats Desiree on big win in Linda's contest with this beautiful depiction of emotions in verse. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/12/2011 4:26:00 PM
Great to see your success Desiree, with this worthy poem's winner circle presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/12/2011 9:54:00 AM
Depression does lead to boredom, Desiree. There's no doubt about it! Great message in your winning poem. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, Desiree
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Date: 5/11/2011 9:56:00 PM
This is sad Desiree. I hope you pop out of it. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 5/11/2011 8:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Desiree. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/11/2011 7:05:00 PM
Congrats Desiree on your success in my contest ..with this emotional entry luv..thankxx for your support..
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Date: 5/11/2011 8:20:00 PM
Awesome news :) Thanks dear
Date: 4/28/2011 2:57:00 PM
Desiree this is also very dep .feelings we all feel at times. you have to do some fun stuff or go out on the town ,dance up a storm. third line maybe -- to me i'm wrong . just thought it might go better. Enjoyed, my Friend Anne
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Date: 4/25/2011 3:20:00 PM
Wonderful poem Desiree, so much feeling here. Soar as high as you can.Anne
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Date: 4/23/2011 10:08:00 PM
well done.. and if its for the contest.. good luck.... I had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.
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Date: 4/20/2011 3:52:00 PM
Nice poem.
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Date: 4/20/2011 9:31:00 AM
well written! can feel the emotions
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Date: 4/20/2011 7:11:00 AM
Very creative thoughts on the subject. Enjoyed!!
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Date: 4/20/2011 6:54:00 AM
thankxx for supoorting my current contest Desiree... good luck.. reading fully at judging time at end of May... am sure will be totally amazed by your entry luv..
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