I Am Anger

As anger, I wager Of you to take control To put you in serious danger Of losing your soul As you become ever stranger

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/31/2024 12:07:00 AM

Wow! Congratulations. Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Denis Bruce
Date: 8/31/2024 2:18:00 PM

Beata, Blessed art thou amongst women for your most gracious comment

Crystol Woods

Date: 8/30/2024 12:30:00 PM

So interesting! "As you become ever stranger"... that's spot on because when it is us who loses control, we don't recognize ourselves in the state... and same with loved ones who suddenly burn with rage. It's always surprising and eerie, like they are strangers. Congratulations! Xo

Denis Bruce
Date: 8/30/2024 2:11:00 PM

Your lovely name ,Crystal, is consistent with your clarity of perspective in relation to my final line. Best wishes, Denis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2024 3:37:00 PM

'this was quite succinct, and I really liked what you had to say. Congrats in my contest

Denis Bruce
Date: 8/30/2024 3:50:00 AM

Thank you ,Andrea, for praising my little offering