Kelly Deschler Poet Personification

I Am An Owl

Who can change what it is to be me?
The owl, hidden there in a night's beauty,
a beauty that most don't even try to see.

I am a deceiver in the shadows
who can show you a different light,
and open your eyes, once closed.

Come nearer. I am not known to bite;
there is nothing here to be afraid of.
Who is just your friend in the night?

In darkness, who will hear my call?
I may be wise for my age at times,
though I never claim to know it all.

My voice is heard; still I go unseen.
Tell me who is magical and mystical,
and yet, all things in between?




Owl: mystery of magic, omens, silent wisdom, vision in the night, deception

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Daver Austin July 18, 2015 at 2:50 PM How original to have the owl as friend. The silence of the bird is mystical and can take one within. Love on ya lots. daver Kelly Deschler July 24, 2015 at 11:08 PM There is something enchanting about the mysterious owl. They are one of my favorite animals... Thank you very much for the lovely comments, Daver... Hugs :)

Sandra Haight May 26, 2015 at 12:31 PM Hi Kelly, I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for your poem about this mysterious bird! Hugs, Sandra Kelly Deschler May 28, 2015 at 4:58 PM Thanks so much for the kind comments and congrats. Its good to see you here, Sandra. Hugs!

Kim Merryman May 24, 2015 at 7:31 PM Kelly, congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim Kelly Deschler May 28, 2015 at 12:32 AM Thanks so much for the kind congrats, Kim!

Poet Destroyer A May 24, 2015 at 3:11 PM Kelly, Congratulations on your awesome Bird win @-> LINDA <-@

John Lawless May 24, 2015 at 7:26 AM The protective keeper of silent wisdom and darkness.....Nicely done Kelly, congrats on the high placement. Kelly Deschler May 26, 2015 at 11:01 PM Thanks so much for the kind comments and congrats. I appreciate it, John!

Shirley Rebstock May 24, 2015 at 5:23 AM Owls are so cool. Love your poem Kelly Deschler May 26, 2015 at 10:46 PM Yes, owls seem to be popular animals and they are one of my favorites... Thank you so much for your kind comments. I appreciate it, Shirley!

Jan Allison May 24, 2015 at 4:18 AM Dropping back with my congrats Kelly I loved your poem the first time I read it:-) Hugs Jan xx Kelly Deschler May 26, 2015 at 3:06 PM Thanks so much for the kind congrats and comments, Jan! Hugs :)

Sneha Rv May 24, 2015 at 12:17 AM CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR MARVELOUS WIN, DEAR KELLY!!! :D :D Kelly Deschler May 26, 2015 at 2:36 PM Thanks so much for the kind congrats, dear Sneha! :)

Skat A May 23, 2015 at 11:08 PM nice win. SK

Edward Ebbs May 23, 2015 at 10:07 PM An Owl with mystery, congrats! Kelly Deschler May 25, 2015 at 10:52 PM Thanks so much for the kind congrats, Ed!

Joseph May May 23, 2015 at 9:51 PM Congrats on a great win Kelly Kelly Deschler May 25, 2015 at 10:43 PM Thanks so much for the kind congrats, Joseph!

Eve Roper May 23, 2015 at 8:50 PM Beautiful write,Kelly, you bring the owl to life. Congratulations on your win hugs eve Kelly Deschler May 25, 2015 at 10:32 PM Thanks so much for your kind comments and congrats, Eve! Hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2015 at 8:29 PM So cool that you chose this mysterious and sometimes ominous bird. You were the only one to choose it. Congrats on your win. I really enjoyed this one. Kelly Deschler May 25, 2015 at 3:23 PM Thanks so much for my placement, Andrea. I am happy that you enjoyed it!... I thought more would choose the owl, since they seem to be very popular animals.

Robert Lindley May 23, 2015 at 12:25 AM I love birds but owls are my favorite. Love this poem and a pleasure to read my friend.. A7... Kelly Deschler May 24, 2015 at 10:25 PM Owls are my favorite birds, as well... Thank you once again for taking the time to read and comment on my poems. It means a lot, my friend :)

Liam Mcdaid May 20, 2015 at 6:45 AM the owl haunting the night very beautifully painted piece kelly love the vision you paint in this Kelly Deschler May 21, 2015 at 2:08 AM Thank you very much, Liam. I'm glad you liked this vision... Sometimes, who is haunting the night is nothing to be afraid of :)

Sneha Rv May 19, 2015 at 12:43 PM Wonderful poem!! Owls are my favourite birds.. :D :D I loved it!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D Kelly Deschler May 21, 2015 at 2:21 PM Thank you, Sneha. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem! I truly appreciate your kind comments :)

Dorian Petersen Potter May 16, 2015 at 6:39 PM Excellent pen Kelly! Beautifully written, personifaction and imagery are great. I truly enjoyed your piece here. A 7!I love owls too, they look so wise and smart don't they.Thanks for visiting my page.Much appreciate it and your kind support,you're very sweet dear friend.Looking forward to reading more of your work soon. Wishing you very lovely weekend! In his light! God bless you! :) D. Kelly Deschler May 18, 2015 at 10:16 PM Owls are probably my favorite animals. Yes, they do look very wise and mysterious, but also very beautiful... I am happy that you enjoyed my poem, Dorian. Thank you so much for your kind words and 7 rating! I hope this will be a great week for you :)

Robert Nehls May 16, 2015 at 3:08 AM Hi Kelly. this is a wonderful poem that gives a little more insight into you and the many thought that make up who you are. And one wonders about the real person behind ourselves and others. Life is complex and worth looking at a little closer. You have given us a glimpse. Very well written, my friend..... Robert. Kelly Deschler May 18, 2015 at 9:55 PM Hi Robert, thank you for your kind comments. I appreciate them very much... I think everyone has two sides to their personalities. Looks are deceiving and it can take time to see who that person really is. But, it is worth the effort to truly know them.

Arthur Vaso May 15, 2015 at 9:25 PM Loved this, now, of course I can not resist to say, this poem was a real hoot! :) Hugs Kelly Deschler May 18, 2015 at 9:46 PM I am so glad you think so, Arthur! Thank you so much! Hugs :)

Paul Callus May 15, 2015 at 5:58 PM I think that this poem really reflects your character, Kelly. Shy....clever, but not boastful....beautiful...mysterious. Gl in the contest. hugs // paul Kelly Deschler May 17, 2015 at 11:52 PM Thank you so much, Paul. Your kindness is always appreciated. Hugs :)

Richard Lamoureux May 15, 2015 at 8:21 AM I like your choice and the words you chose to express yourself. I have excellent night vision so I can see you, magnificent! Kelly Deschler May 17, 2015 at 11:12 PM Thank you for your kind words and for seeing me, Rick. I truly appreciate that very much :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri May 15, 2015 at 12:28 AM Hi Kelly im a bit scared of owls but great to see u choose it for personification. For the wise owl adds that mystical touch of mystery to your poem that makes it soo enchanting. And your rhyme scheme is awesome too.Revealing a dark side that is not evil is what's poetic. Kudos. Warm wishes. Kelly Deschler May 17, 2015 at 10:41 PM Owls can be frightening and mysterious because they are heard but not seen. Actually, they are amazing and beautiful animals... Thank you so much for your kind words!

Kp Nunez May 14, 2015 at 7:18 PM There is mystery, and wisdom associated with the owl. You have captured them both in this write. Beauty both in form and content, I hope you will win, Kelly. 7. Kim :-) Kelly Deschler May 17, 2015 at 2:29 PM Thank you, Kim. Your nice comments are very much appreciated :)

Joseph May May 13, 2015 at 9:43 PM I like this mystical write Kelly.... nicely done... best wishes... Kelly Deschler May 17, 2015 at 12:54 AM Thank you for your kind comments. I'm happy that you liked it, Joseph!

Jan Allison May 13, 2015 at 4:01 PM you have portrayed yourself so cleverly in this poem beautiful yet shy and hiding in the shadows - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Kelly Deschler May 15, 2015 at 9:30 PM Thank you, Jan. I appreciate your kind words and good luck wishes :) Hugs!