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I Am An Iris

I am an Iris Sometimes sporting a fuzzy beard, I hear wisdom say, “Do not shave.” “It would come back thicker,” it warns. To razors I’ll not be a slave. Elusive is “promise in love,” but my purple face is fearless. Nurturing true love takes effort; to snapdragons I am earless. Faith has shown I reap what I’ve sown. Though Iris’s lifespan is short, a bulb of hope roots in my heart where butterflies are my escort. *Iris means “wisdom and valor, faith, promise in love, hope” Written May 3, 2015 for Andrea’s Flower contest

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Date: 9/23/2016 2:29:00 PM
Requiring several reads. I am so thick. I thought it was a little girl writing this poem, but no, tis a delicate flower. Finally, the poem is all tenderness and sensitivity from ground to top. Love, daver
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Date: 5/26/2016 1:01:00 PM
A wonderful piece. I love this beautiful share
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Date: 5/26/2015 8:37:00 PM
Carolyn, congratulations on having this beautiful poem selected as a feature poem for the week, really an awesome write, 7 . . .
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Date: 5/13/2015 4:10:00 PM
Ah I see you have made some study of the language of flowers Carolyn, a well penned and colourful write, best to you there..'
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Date: 5/10/2015 7:00:00 AM
Awesome choice of flower, and interesting fun write, grats on your win!
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Date: 5/9/2015 4:42:00 PM
Carolyn, I love the creative language you used in this! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/9/2015 7:33:00 AM
Congrats on your win Carolyn
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Date: 5/9/2015 6:21:00 AM
Love this one Carolyn!Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/9/2015 5:25:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Carolyn:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/9/2015 1:39:00 AM
this was very creative, Carolyn. I mostly liked yours for some of the whimsical lines, such as being "earless" to SNAPdragons and having a purple fearless face! Also, I just loved the final stanza. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 5/6/2015 9:37:00 AM
You make the Iris proud, Carolyn! Three stanzas are ample to show off its attributes. Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/4/2015 9:13:00 AM
A short poem but all attributes of the meaning of Iris is included in this. A superb write. #7
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Date: 5/4/2015 12:20:00 AM
You have integrated the meaning well. I like what is implied in that first stanza. Very clever. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/3/2015 10:20:00 PM
Beautiful write Carolyn ... love the humor in the first stanza....
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 5/5/2015 6:01:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph. I found a hair growing on my chin and went berserk :D
Date: 5/3/2015 6:28:00 PM
i did know about the Iris previously. Just come to know from you frist time. Really, i loved it. For Iris's wisdom.... 7+++. Good luck in the contest, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 5/3/2015 3:56:00 PM
beautifully penned Carolyn Andrea will have a tough time judging this one have seen some cracking poems:-) Good luck! :-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:56:00 PM
Life is short and we all reap what we've sown, though sometimes what we've sown may not flourish from a drought...and that's where your bulb of hope comes in..good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:36:00 PM
Beautiful last line, Carolyn!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 5/3/2015 2:40:00 PM
Thank you, Mark. I always associate butterflies with flowers.

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