Notes About The Poem

I am alive

Stagnant of thought.
Albeit, without any emotion.
Love never sought.
Life without living.
Tumultuous nothingness.
No taking or giving.
Intrepidly I advance, devoid of fear. 
This earth I have trod.
That is why I am here.
I am a child of God.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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La France Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Speaks, , congratultions on your win in my Grook contest, wonderful, great image, Constance
Volumes Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:32 PM
Thank you so much
Kendrick Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 4:21 AM
Good one. I found the picture and topic very emotive. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
Volumes Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:32 PM
Thank you so much
Fowler Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 2:20 PM
Hi my dear friend Svvie. What a sad little commentary, but advances acceptance and being prepared. Congratulations! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 7:30 AM
Back, same day, with Congrats!
Volumes Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:32 PM
Thank you so much
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 6:24 AM
Emotive and thought-provoking!
Volumes Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:33 PM
:)
mysore Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 5:20 AM
sword like words, 'no taking no giving'. joy is universal, sadness is known only to the heart that has suffered dear poet. write more now dear friend.
Volumes Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:32 PM
Thank you so much
Scott Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 7:15 PM
You. Are a beautiful presence in my world of poetry.. but more, dear friend, an inspiration. So glad you are here and this poem is so very touching. Grateful for you. Sending love. S:) xx
Volumes Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 7:19 PM
Thank you Sam.
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