I am alive

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Stagnant of thought. Albeit, without any emotion. Love never sought. Life without living. Tumultuous nothingness. No taking or giving. Intrepidly I advance, devoid of fear. This earth I have trod. That is why I am here. I am a child of God.

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Constance La France

Date: 10/1/2024 10:44:00 AM

Speaks, , congratultions on your win in my Grook contest, wonderful, great image, Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/23/2024 4:21:00 AM

Good one. I found the picture and topic very emotive. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/22/2024 2:20:00 PM

Hi my dear friend Svvie. What a sad little commentary, but advances acceptance and being prepared. Congratulations! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/22/2024 7:30:00 AM

Back, same day, with Congrats!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/22/2024 6:24:00 AM

Emotive and thought-provoking!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/22/2024 5:20:00 AM

sword like words, 'no taking no giving'. joy is universal, sadness is known only to the heart that has suffered dear poet. write more now dear friend.

Sam Scott

Date: 8/21/2024 7:15:00 PM

You. Are a beautiful presence in my world of poetry.. but more, dear friend, an inspiration. So glad you are here and this poem is so very touching. Grateful for you. Sending love. S:) xx

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/21/2024 7:19:00 PM

Thank you Sam.