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I Am a Yesterday Dreamer

And in my dream- I am a yesterday dreamer, I am transported to a long ago summer; and become lost in a sea of blooms and glitter, where I roam touching each fragile flower. I know this place- it is the garden of mother, where a butterfly drifts like a sun dancer; yes, I recall that bright painted daisy cluster, and the swaying sweet scented lavender. Delightful are the phlox- in a tapestry border, and those pink parfait verbena crawlers; rich blue are the morning glory hangers, and the black-eyed susan are still stunners. I walk in awe- a flower garden picker, and little birds came to a wooden feeder; the air is full of their constant chatter, even the whirling, twirling of a hummer. I see my childhood cat- I called her whisper, but my dream is fading and memories scatter; I try to hold on by dreaming just a bit deeper, oh no, everything is gone in one last quiver. _____________________ May 22, 2018 - Reprint Poetry/Monorhyme/I Am A Yesterday Dreamer Copyright Protected, ID 05-1381-497-22 All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France Submitted into the Standard contest, Your Best Monorhyme, sponsor, William Kekaula. Judged 08/20/2021 First Place

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Date: 8/27/2021 8:13:00 AM
I was swept up into your lush dreamscape, Constance. Your rich imagery brought me to the center of your yesterday’s dream. A transcendent beauty. Congratulations on your excellent win in William’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Constance La France
Date: 8/27/2021 8:26:00 PM
Susan, thanks for the great comment, the compliment and the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/20/2021 8:20:00 PM
Your poem was read, then reread but slower. A vivid depiction exposes 'Yesterday's Dreamer' with a generous measure of justice. Methinks, Edward is a psychic? Blessings, Constance, for sharing your penetrative yet sensitive talents, Aloha!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/21/2021 1:00:00 PM
William, thank you for the contest and my placement and for the nice comment, and compliment ~Constance
Date: 8/17/2021 6:50:00 AM
Fantastic and beautifully written monorhyme, Constance:-) Best of luck---though you won't need it---in the contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/17/2021 7:46:00 AM
Edward, thank you for the compliment and the encouragement ~ Constance
Date: 8/16/2021 5:15:00 PM
WOW, I love it, Constance; what a wonderful Monorythme; you convey the reader to the sky, flowers, and gardens while providing a detailed picture of your upbringing. My best wishes for a win.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/17/2021 7:47:00 AM
Lasaad, thank you for the visit and compliment on my poem ~Constance

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