Jack Horne Poet Rhyme

I Am a Stork

I flew above a brood of brats,
like fighting, wailing alley cats;
defamed, I stood there like a dork:
their mother blamed them on a stork!

For Andrea’s I am a stork contest

Birth, unspoken communication: stork

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Phyllis Babcock September 1, 2015 at 10:50 AM Congrats on your win on the contest. love phyl

Joe Maverick June 21, 2015 at 1:41 PM Hello Jack, enjoyed the 'stilted' pause as described by the stork L O L)) keep well..'

Emile Pinet June 20, 2015 at 1:44 PM Congratulations on your win, your poem was innovative, captivating and entertaining, all in one. Emile.

Constance La France June 16, 2015 at 11:52 AM Jack this was great for the contest and a big congratulations on your placement and thanks for visiting my poem, the old fat cat

Kp Nunez May 28, 2015 at 7:15 AM LOL! Enjoyed your witty write. A 7 . Congratulations on your win, Jack! My bad for being so late. Still catching up with my reading of the winning writes.

Kim Merryman May 24, 2015 at 7:28 PM A funny write, Jack! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A May 24, 2015 at 3:11 PM Jack, Congratulations on your awesome Bird win @-> LINDA <-@

Edward Ebbs May 24, 2015 at 7:32 AM LOL, the brood of brats I bet love the stork, congrats and clever :)

John Lawless May 24, 2015 at 7:22 AM Spoken like a true dad. This is pissa!! congrats on the win....still laughing...

Shirley Rebstock May 24, 2015 at 5:20 AM Clever poem, enjoyed

Jan Allison May 24, 2015 at 4:17 AM Dropping back with my congrats Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A May 23, 2015 at 11:08 PM Jack, that's awesome. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2015 at 8:28 PM Jack, your humor remains one of the best at SOUP. I just adored the last two lines of this witty poem!! Congrats in my contest.

Paul Callus May 11, 2015 at 10:50 AM Witty poem, Jack! The poor stork often gets lumbered with things that he's not guilty of! gl in the contest. // paul

Constance La France May 11, 2015 at 7:40 AM Jack, lol, funny one, I bet lots of mothers hate that stork at times, good luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, Jacqueline. . .

Sara Kendrick May 11, 2015 at 5:34 AM Cute one..Reads like a winner..Way to go..That is a lot to blame on a mere bird that is those misbehaving children..Thanks for the visits..Sara

Jan Allison May 10, 2015 at 5:01 PM like the humourous approach to the stork:-) hugs Jan xx