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I Am a Robin

On the wing in the dawning light, Spring's new growth comes into sight. Flowers, berries, nuts and seeds, a smorgasbord to meet my needs. I am a robin in grey-brown attire, with my orange-red vest adding some fire. A harbinger of Spring am I, give ear to my joyous cry: Spring! Spring! Wonderful, marvelous, glorious Spring! Oh look! A fat juicy worm. Don't you just love how he wiggles and squirms? Gulp...down the hatch! Wow! What a treat! Now to my roost I must retreat. My mate and I must build a nest, a comfy home where our young can rest.
Robin means new growth 5/14/15 "Picture yourself as a bird"

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Date: 5/28/2015 7:20:00 AM
This is such a lighthearted write, full of warmth and charm. A 7 . Congratulations on your win, Kim! My bad for being so late. Still catching up with my reading of the winning writes.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/28/2015 4:54:00 PM
I know what you mean about playing catch-up. Not enough hours in a day! Thank you for stopping by!
Date: 5/28/2015 12:40:00 AM
Seeing a robin is a sure sign that spring has arrived... My middle name is also Robin, so these birds are special to me... Congrats on your win with this charming poem! Very nicely penned, Kim!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/28/2015 4:52:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it, Kelly. Thank you for stopping by!
Date: 5/27/2015 9:15:00 PM
Kim, this poem is a delight. Little wonder it put you into the winner's column. Congratulations on an excellent composition (one I wish I had written). Love and hugs.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/28/2015 4:51:00 PM
I appreciate your encouraging words, Paul! Thank you!
Date: 5/26/2015 12:33:00 PM
Hi Kim, I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for your very sweet robin poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/28/2015 4:51:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 5/24/2015 3:16:00 PM
Kim, Congratulations on your awesome Bird win @-> LINDA <-@
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/28/2015 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, P.D.! Appreciate it!
Date: 5/24/2015 7:36:00 AM
We have a Robin nest at the outside edge under the cover for our deck...kind of unusual. Congrats on your poem :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:41:00 PM
Thank you, Ed! I appreciate you stopping by!
Date: 5/24/2015 4:20:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:40:00 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Date: 5/23/2015 11:11:00 PM
awesome...SK
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, Skat!
Date: 5/23/2015 10:00:00 PM
Beautiful write Kim...Congrats on your win
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:39:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 5/23/2015 8:32:00 PM
A very cute poem, Kim. Thanks for entering it into my contest. Congrats for your fine job!!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:38:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I appreciate my placement in your contest.
Date: 5/15/2015 1:08:00 AM
A true robin. 7+!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2015 8:54:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment, Hannington!
Date: 5/14/2015 6:51:00 PM
this is charming and delightful, kim! good luck in the contest!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2015 8:54:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 5/14/2015 6:19:00 PM
Robins are one of my favorite yard birds, Kim. I love your personification because that is exactly how they act! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2015 8:53:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra for your encouraging comments!
Date: 5/14/2015 2:41:00 PM
I love seeing the robin's in my garden especially if I have been digging and they are ready to harvest the juicy worms - a delightful write Kim good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2015 8:53:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I appreciate you stopping by!
Date: 5/14/2015 2:29:00 PM
I love the robin...there are a couple on my grass now collecting some clippings for their nest...lovely Tim
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2015 8:51:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Tim.
Date: 5/14/2015 12:47:00 PM
- Yes, the robin have such a busy time in the spring - A beautiful bird ... and a beautiful and joyful poem, Kim (7) - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/14/2015 1:07:00 PM
My computer glitched. I appreciate your encouraging comments.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/14/2015 1:06:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! I

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