Kim Van Breda Poet Alliteration

I Am a Poem

I AM A POEM

Imaginative illustration
intricately impassioned
impeccable individualism
important

Accomplished arrangement
ageless authenticity
appraised actualized
alive

Perfection personified 
paint-brushed panoramic
poignant paradigms
personal

Overabundance optimized
optimistic omniscienct
oceans outshined
original

Enraptured edition
elevated endearment
effervescent  embodiment
exclusive

Magnificent meaning
meritorious muse
miraculously majestic
moral

I am a saint
sanctified by God
through His Son
Jesus


I AM A POEM

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Earl Schumacker April 14, 2014 at 12:01 PM Hi Kim, I see you are not afraid to explore new forms of poetic expression and utilize a vast lexicon of words to create interesting worlds in your poetry. They say variety is the spice of life. (I don't know who they are...but I think they're right.) I am enjoying the spice and variety in your creations. Keep up the good work. Also: Thank you so much for your very kind remarks about Cascadia. Regards, Earl

Tom Valles November 27, 2013 at 3:00 PM Brilliant, wonderful writing. So appreciate your testimony.

Patrick Nigros October 14, 2013 at 11:31 AM TRULLY YOU ARE A POEM WRITTEN BY THE PEN INKED WITH THE BLOOD OF OUR GLORIOUS LORD

Mustapha Mohammed August 1, 2013 at 2:19 PM Very much inspiring work Kim.May I add that this was truly exceptional work on your part.

Edward Orozco June 14, 2013 at 8:52 AM Beautiful piece, very descriptive towards all a poem is! Than you for sharing this. - Edward Edward Orozco June 14, 2013 at 8:53 AM Thank u** :D

Kim Morrison June 13, 2013 at 5:59 PM This is a very interesting and well crafted poem. Congrats Kim!

Richard Lamoureux June 12, 2013 at 7:27 AM Good morning Kim Van Breda June 12, 2013 at 7:42 AM Hi Richard... you guys in the USA a bit slower than us this side of the tide in SA :) Time here is 3-40pm. Trying to find inspiration to post something really clever, but ended up reading everyone else's latest posts instead. I guess I still have an hour or two before I have to do dinner....if the inspiration comes. Got as far as a title x

Karen Anglesey June 10, 2013 at 6:13 PM I love it that you chose an inspirational message that inspired you to write such a magnificent poem. Exceptional ! Outstanding ! :)

Kim Van Breda June 10, 2013 at 12:10 PM Thanks to all fellow P/Soup people for your positive and encouraging comments on this one. It meant a lot as this poem was inspired by the message we had at church this past Sunday-- we are all intricately woven and perfected-- like a poem.. through our Creator.. I love it when God gets the Glory :)

Poet Tacito June 10, 2013 at 9:27 AM Tremendous!! Ah, the declaration is wonderful here!

Timothy Hicks June 10, 2013 at 1:25 AM Some of the best alliteration I've seen... it's not an easy style to write in, but you did it splendidly! I hope your pages continue on for years to come :)

Christine Phillips June 9, 2013 at 3:18 PM IAPOEM... beautifully crafted poem with each letter carefully engraved in each stanza. This is a beautiful work of art.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2013 at 2:29 PM - Love it... at first line to the last, Kim - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux June 9, 2013 at 1:44 PM He was on a roll when he wrote you!

Wilma Neels June 9, 2013 at 11:17 AM Kim you got me all smiles after reading this gem. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Really enjoyed reading you tonight ;) *hugs* Wilma

Julie Heckman June 9, 2013 at 11:10 AM what a fun ride...thanks for commenting on my poem.

Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2013 at 9:14 AM I love Alliteration, a beautiful ending Kim, i have tried out this for a few times. It was introduced by a fellow soup poet, who loves alliteration. Alive is the feeling... God Bless...Linda