Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Personification

I Am a Tree Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Entry Submitted: 2025 September 24

Contest Judged: 2025 October 05

Contest Placement: 3rd Place

I Am a Pine Tree

I am a pine cone tree in the Evergreen state of Washington
My lower branches hang downward, that slap the unwary with pine needles, pine cones, and a hidden  —squirrel
The mid branches stretch out for birds to congregate for their nesting
While the upper branches in its smaller gamut reach for the sun
We rally together in the face of windstorms
Albeit, we stand helpless as our forgiving aged remnants tend beneath our girth as the drying summer —heat threatens us
The beast's droppings enrich our soil
Rainwater nourishes us for the furtherance
We exalt in the sands' host of its endless pour through time
And revel in the promise of our pine cone familial forest, assuring our survival's worth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Alhemaidy Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 11:19 PM
Congratulations on your nice win!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 12:13 AM
Thank you, my friend. Aloha.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 12:02 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "I Am A Pine Tree" write. Have a Blessed day writing away.........
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 12:54 PM
Thank you, my friend. Have a blessed day as well, Aloha.
Kitchin Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 6:52 AM
William, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative tree poem.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 9:28 AM
Thank you, Tania. I appreciate the recognition. Aloha.
Sharma Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 8:23 AM
Nicely done. All the best for the contest.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 8:41 AM
Thank you, Aloha.
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