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I Am a Flower (Internal rhyme) I've recently begun to think ~ of myself as a flower I'm a bloom on the brink ~ of dying with each hour. But I've also come to learn ~ that I should not fear death. It's a concept I'll not spurn ~ when I take my final breath. The reason that I know ~ is that a flower is just a part Of the seed God did sow ~ from deep within His heart. Little buds will form anew ~ upon my sturdy stem. It's a prophecy come true ~ and it's all because of Him. As each withered blossom falls ~ another starts to thrive. God waters one and all ~ to keep us healthy and alive. Each Autumn I stand tall ~ and proudly show my face. It's the best season of all ~ for my petals are in place. I'm a colorful attraction ~ to those who visit me. Bringing much satisfaction ~ to the busy little bees. Take in my fragrant scent ~ Enjoy it while it lasts. My beauty was surely meant ~ to linger when I've passed. But I'll never weep or mourn ~ a demise such as mine For when I was born ~ I was placed upon God's vine. From tiny bud to wilted end ~ I live for just a while In a garden God does tend ~ I'm His fragile little child. Mother's roots are intact ~ there are more like me to come. I have a name, in fact ~ I am called Chrysanthemum.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/9/2024 5:41:00 PM
Pretty poem Lin, to me, about the cycle of life.
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Date: 4/10/2024 8:06:00 AM
Hi, David. You went WAY back for this one. Thank you.
Date: 3/11/2017 9:41:00 AM
A lovely poem Lin. Nice rhyme. I relate woman to flowers. Each special woman associated with a particular flower. My mother is a Carnation. Some change over time. My wife for instance I've seen as a Tibouchina when we first met, later an orchid, and a rose.
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Date: 10/22/2015 12:31:00 PM
You are welcome Lin
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Date: 10/22/2015 9:58:00 AM
I'm Impressed-! Well done Lin.
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Date: 10/22/2015 10:40:00 AM
Thank you for such an kind comment, Joan.
Date: 10/8/2015 7:03:00 AM
Hi Lin. Yes, A complex flower indeed. This is a fine poem of life and faith. The internal rhyme is fun and flows well. Very easy to read and enjoyable. my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 10/8/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poems. I value your comment and compliment.
Date: 10/7/2015 3:54:00 PM
lovely descriptive rhyme with clever internal rhyme:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2015 4:29:00 PM
Thanks for your kind remarks, Jan. It was a fun poem to write.

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