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I Am a Flower

I Am a Flower    (Internal rhyme)

I've recently begun to think ~ of myself as a flower
I'm a bloom on the brink ~ of dying with each hour.

But I've also come to learn ~ that I should not fear death.
It's a concept I'll not spurn ~ when I take my final breath.

The reason that I know ~ is that a flower is just a part
Of the seed God did sow ~ from deep within His heart.

Little buds will form anew ~ upon my sturdy stem.
It's a prophecy come true ~ and it's all because of Him.

As each withered blossom falls ~ another starts to thrive.
God waters one and all ~ to keep us healthy and alive.

Each Autumn I stand tall ~ and proudly show my face.
It's the best season of all ~ for my petals are in place.

I'm a colorful attraction ~ to those who visit me.
Bringing much satisfaction ~ to the busy little bees.

Take in my fragrant scent ~ Enjoy it while it lasts.
My beauty was surely meant ~ to linger when I've passed.

But I'll never weep or mourn ~ a demise such as mine
For when I was born ~ I was placed upon God's vine.

From tiny bud to wilted end ~ I live for just a while
In a garden God does tend ~ I'm His fragile little child.

Mother's roots are intact ~ there are more like me to come.
I have a name, in fact ~ I am called Chrysanthemum.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Crandall Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 5:41 PM
Pretty poem Lin, to me, about the cycle of life.
Lane Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 8:06 AM
Hi, David. You went WAY back for this one. Thank you.
Inman Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 9:41 AM
A lovely poem Lin. Nice rhyme. I relate woman to flowers. Each special woman associated with a particular flower. My mother is a Carnation. Some change over time. My wife for instance I've seen as a Tibouchina when we first met, later an orchid, and a rose.
Donnelly Ellis Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 12:31 PM
You are welcome Lin
Donnelly Ellis Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 9:58 AM
I'm Impressed-! Well done Lin.
Lane Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Thank you for such an kind comment, Joan.
Nehls Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 7:03 AM
Hi Lin. Yes, A complex flower indeed. This is a fine poem of life and faith. The internal rhyme is fun and flows well. Very easy to read and enjoyable. my friend.... Robert.
Lane Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 7:53 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poems. I value your comment and compliment.
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 3:54 PM
lovely descriptive rhyme with clever internal rhyme:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Thanks for your kind remarks, Jan. It was a fun poem to write.
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