I Am a Dandelion

I Am /A   Dandelion

I stem out to a beautiful flower dressed in yellow, 
with a milky latex that runs in my veins.
Omitting a fragrant perfume of my own.

As the night falls, I close and slumber till sunrise.

Like a caterpillar turning into a butterfly,   
I’m  standing tall with downy white feathery fine  hair. 

As a  gentle cool breeze  whispers  with a kiss, 
I surrender  my fruit  to fall into its hands.
Swept away and drifts  like little propellers with the wind,
like a thief in the night whisking them away over long distances
Out to their lovers  as they mate with the rich brown soil. 

©By: Eve Roper 5/3/2015    

Dandelion late Middle English: from French dent-de-lion, translation of medieval Latin dens leonis ‘lion's tooth’ (because of the jagged shape of the leaves).
Contest : Picture Yourself as a Flower! 
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
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Nance Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 7:07 AM
Wonderful choice, The dandelion is more than a weed, these little beauties are way more complex, your write showed so many positive characteristics of a dandelion and was a pleasure to read. :)
A   Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 8:17 PM
Eve, this is awesome.... If I ever was a flower I'd be the bluebonnet. :) Linda
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Thank you,Linda, so much for the wonderful inspiring compliment I did need that my dear friend. Bluebonnet state flower is perfect but my bluebonnet poem didn't make it . Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
A  Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 6:32 PM
Eve, this one's the most popular on this contest. CONGRATULATIONS on the win. :) SKAT
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:35 PM
Thank you,Skat, so much for the wonderful inspiring compliment I did need that my dear friend. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve and Happy Mother's Day
Merryman Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 5:03 PM
Love the metaphors you used. Great write, Eve! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:35 PM
Thank you,Kim, so much for the inspiring compliment Blessings Eve and Happy Mother's Day
Mandani Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Ha, another Dandelion lover! Congrats on your win.
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:37 PM
Thank you,Abdul, blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
May Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 7:40 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win Eve
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:41 PM
Thank you,Joseph, for the congratulations. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
Poet Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 6:38 AM
Beautifully written!Congrats on your win!
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:41 PM
Thank you,Kash, for the congratulations and your compliement . Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 5:28 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Eve:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:42 PM
Thank you,Jan , for the congratulations. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 1:47 AM
Eve, this is so cute! Except for line 9, i thought this was a perfectly crafted dandelion poem!! Thanks for supporting my contest. congrats to you.
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:39 PM
Thank you,Andrea, so much for the wonderful inspiring compliment I did did fix it my dear friend. Thank you again:~) Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve and Happy Mother's Day
May Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 6:50 PM
Beautifully penned Eve...a 7...hugs
Manassian Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 11:38 AM
Sweet Eve....thank you for your lovely visit today. You are a pretty flower...The dandelion is a lovely take on the contest theme. I loved the second stanza....my favorite part. It's wispy and dreamy...and makes one want to live in the moment. I've been away for a while, and can't be back full swing yet, but I wanted to pass by and thank you for being an amazing friend. Hugs....
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:38 PM
Thank you, Eileen, so much for the wonderful inspiring compliment I did need that my dear friend. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve and Happy Mother's Day
Pinet Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 9:46 AM
An interesting face put on an old nemesis known as the Dandelion. Pretty yes, but also a nuisance weed. "Out to the their lovers " typo?
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:44 PM
Thank you, Emile, I'm always missing typos, I'm very grateful. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
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May 4, 2015 at 6:10 AM
Thank you for wishing me luck in the contest, Eve. And the same right back a ya. I love to see the bright and cheerful yellow dandelions. A joy to read your poem, and a 7 rating.
Roper Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 8:26 AM
Thank you, Darlene, but a compliment I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and also thank you for rating. Blessings Eve
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 3:20 AM
- If you were a flower ..... I'd picked you! - Beautifully, dear Eve - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Anne-Lise, I love your beautiful avatar, you're such a beautiful lady. Thank you for your compliment and the good luck. Blessings and hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 2:23 AM
Beautiful imagery Eve good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 8:34 AM
Jan, thank you for your wonderful support and being there for me with a good. Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Wild and free...great imagery Eve...good luck Tim
Roper Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Tim, thank you for your compliment and good. Blessings dear friend Eve
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