I Am a Caladium

Born a bulb in blackest soil,
covered in total dark.
A lonely space beneath the earth,
waiting for rains to come.
Felt the moisture of early spring,
started to reach for the sun.
Broke free of my darkness, towards the light,
growth of my stem begun.
My flower turned a lighter red,
edges a darker green.
I thought my days as a garden's greeter,
would create a colorful scene.
Until the day I lost my stem,
a circling string.... from a weed eater!

contest Picture yourself a flower
caladium..immense delight and joy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 8:28 PM
nice win...pd
A  Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 6:17 PM
Frederic. Congratulations. :) SKAT
Poet Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:19 AM
Beautiful poem Frederic. Congrats on your win!
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 5:36 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Frederic:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 2:14 AM
OH my, what a way to end!! or at least lose one's stem!! I enjoyed this one. congrats in my contest, Frederic.
Parker Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 10:23 AM
Yes! you finally spelled my name right.
Onclaud Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 1:57 PM
i got carried away by your beautiful string of word choices and stunned as it ended with an element of surprise, frederick.. a unique write!.. huggs
Allison Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 2:11 AM
lovely imagery and personifcation Frederic - good luck in the contest - Andrea has a tough job ahead judging this one I have seen some wonderful entries:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 11:50 PM
Hahaha... So beautiful then you destroyed the poor flower. A 7 + for this beautiful verse a winner for sure.
Konos Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 9:54 PM
Best one I have seen thus far...really lovely...thanks....
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