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Tania's Tree Contest ~ 9/26/25

I Am A Bonsai Willow Tree

I am called 'the ancient one' among my peers,
known for my sweeping limbs, as if they weep.
I was taken from the bank of the River Sugen
when my tender roots were still quite young.
From Nature's arms, I was carefully replanted,
nurtured and shaped by the one who cares for me.
He's gently pruned my limbs to keep me healthy
and taken me outside to absorb morning sunlight.
I am proud to be a specimen of Japanese culture,
a miniature version of my Asian flora ancestors.
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 5:55 AM
What a fun tree you found to write about! Oh, the love and patience it takes to care for a bonsai. Congrats, Lin!
Barden Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 3:32 PM
Love this, Lin!! I have two bonsai - a 15 year-old Chinese Elm and a 7 year-old flowering tea tree - I have a bunch of plants but they are my faves, and I’ve always wanted a willow! Wonderfully penning my friend - you have captured the magic. :o) <3
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 6:46 AM
Thank you, Greg. I used to have quite a few. One of my faves was a Chinese elms, and I loved the serrated edges of its leaves. To own a willow would be wonderful!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 11:43 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful write again. Have a Blessed day writing away.........
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 6:45 AM
Thank you very much for returning and your congratulations, Paula.
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 11:40 AM
Ahh you have explained this tree so well. It's a beauty. Congratulations
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 6:44 AM
Thanks, Andrea.
Kitchin Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 6:27 AM
Lin, congratulations on your first place win with your wonderful and unique tree poem.
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 6:44 AM
Thanks for the honor of one of your awards, Tania.
Beaufort Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 5:42 PM
Lin, someone did a great job with the tree and you did a great job with the description of it all. A fitting tribute to an ancient custom. Smiles!!
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 6:43 AM
Bonsai are amazing. I used to have them years ago and treasured each one. Nothing like the willow in this photo, but it's a beautiful art form of nature. Stunted, but masterfully done.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 11:19 AM
What a beautiful write and picture you have for the Bonsai Willow Tree. Love Both... "Good Luck" from the coconut tree. Have a Blessed day writing away..........
Lane Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 12:38 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Paula.
Sharma Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 8:57 AM
A sweet treat of bonsai!!
Lane Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 12:38 PM
Thank you very much.
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