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I Am a Blue Marble With White Spirals

While writing this at night
I felt someone watching me from above
I looked up and met stars
Stars and still stars and stars again
Millions and millions of miles away over there
Seated at that twinkling window
Are you too writing poetry like me
Can you give me a starry line 
from your enthralling sway
I am a blue marble with white spirals


Dated July 3, 2019
The Universe Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nina Parmenter

Copyright © Probir Gupta | Year Posted 2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/21/2020 5:31:00 PM Hello Probir Gupta, writng poetry under the stars oh how nice that would be. Enjoy your evening my friend. Login to Reply

Susan Jeavons Date: 7/28/2019 1:11:00 PM Congratulations on your win Probir! Blessings, Susan Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/29/2019 8:54:00 AM Thank you, Susan ...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/8/2019 9:22:00 AM Sublime penning Probir, you have brilliantly captured the "awe", congratulations for your fine first place finish, gorgeous work. xomo Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/8/2019 10:16:00 AM Thank you, Maureen ...

Brenda Chiri Date: 7/8/2019 2:29:00 AM Probir congrats on your win! And an excellent win it was!;) Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/8/2019 10:19:00 AM Aah ... itmeenan ... a beautiful Urdu word ... satisfaction ... Thank you so much ...

Beata Agustin Date: 7/8/2019 12:16:00 AM Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you! Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/8/2019 12:33:00 AM Thank you ...

Susan Ashley Date: 7/7/2019 6:21:00 PM Your ethereal imagery enthralled me and is truly breathtaking. I so enjoyed the vast imagination of your beautiful musings, Probir. Congratulations on your excellent and inspiring trophy win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/8/2019 12:36:00 AM So encouraging your comments are, Susan ... Thank you so much ... Glad that you liked it ...

P.S. Awtry Date: 7/7/2019 5:29:00 PM Congratulations on your 1st place finish! “Are you too writing poetry like me?” Wow! Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/8/2019 12:38:00 AM Thank you ...

David Drowley Date: 7/7/2019 5:08:00 PM Probir, Congratulations on your well-deserved win! You capture earth so well and so simply in perfect perspective. David Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/8/2019 12:39:00 AM Thank you, David ...

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/7/2019 3:31:00 PM wow, incredible writing, Probir. Congrats on your trophy win. Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/8/2019 12:41:00 AM Hi Andrea ... I am glad that you like the poem ... Thank you so much ...

Jan Allison Date: 7/7/2019 2:22:00 PM a fabulous take on the contest theme probir many congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/8/2019 12:42:00 AM Thank you, Jan ...

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/7/2019 11:56:00 AM Wonderful thought! Congratulations! Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/7/2019 12:00:00 PM Thank you ...

Janice Canerdy Date: 7/7/2019 10:05:00 AM CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Probir! Janice Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/7/2019 11:05:00 AM Thank you, Janice ...

Winged Warrior Date: 7/7/2019 10:00:00 AM Congrats!! Probir my friend...lovely universal verse...sending love...^WW^ Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/7/2019 11:07:00 AM Thank you, Warrior ...

Eve Roper Date: 7/7/2019 9:33:00 AM wonderful and well thought verse, Probir, the stars are so beautiful and mysterious …. congratulations on a 1st place win... Hugs Eve Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/7/2019 11:08:00 AM Thank you, Eve ... Love ...

Line Gauthier Date: 7/7/2019 9:28:00 AM Lovely poem, Probir. Congrats on your gold medal win. Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 7/7/2019 11:08:00 AM Thank you, Line ...