Probir Gupta Poet Free verse

I Am a Blue Marble With White Spirals

While writing this at night
I felt someone watching me from above
I looked up and met stars
Stars and still stars and stars again
Millions and millions of miles away over there
Seated at that twinkling window
Are you too writing poetry like me
Can you give me a starry line 
from your enthralling sway
I am a blue marble with white spirals


Dated July 3, 2019
The Universe Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nina Parmenter

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Darlene De Beaulieu May 21, 2020 at 5:31 PM Hello Probir Gupta, writng poetry under the stars oh how nice that would be. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Susan Jeavons July 28, 2019 at 1:11 PM Congratulations on your win Probir! Blessings, Susan Probir Gupta July 29, 2019 at 8:54 AM Thank you, Susan ...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 8, 2019 at 9:22 AM Sublime penning Probir, you have brilliantly captured the "awe", congratulations for your fine first place finish, gorgeous work. xomo Probir Gupta July 8, 2019 at 10:16 AM Thank you, Maureen ...

Brenda Chiri July 8, 2019 at 2:29 AM Probir congrats on your win! And an excellent win it was!;) Probir Gupta July 8, 2019 at 10:19 AM Aah ... itmeenan ... a beautiful Urdu word ... satisfaction ... Thank you so much ...

Beata Agustin July 8, 2019 at 12:16 AM Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you! Probir Gupta July 8, 2019 at 12:33 AM Thank you ...

Susan Ashley July 7, 2019 at 6:21 PM Your ethereal imagery enthralled me and is truly breathtaking. I so enjoyed the vast imagination of your beautiful musings, Probir. Congratulations on your excellent and inspiring trophy win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Probir Gupta July 8, 2019 at 12:36 AM So encouraging your comments are, Susan ... Thank you so much ... Glad that you liked it ...

P.S. Awtry July 7, 2019 at 5:29 PM Congratulations on your 1st place finish! “Are you too writing poetry like me?” Wow! Probir Gupta July 8, 2019 at 12:38 AM Thank you ...

David Drowley July 7, 2019 at 5:08 PM Probir, Congratulations on your well-deserved win! You capture earth so well and so simply in perfect perspective. David Probir Gupta July 8, 2019 at 12:39 AM Thank you, David ...

Andrea Dietrich July 7, 2019 at 3:31 PM wow, incredible writing, Probir. Congrats on your trophy win. Probir Gupta July 8, 2019 at 12:41 AM Hi Andrea ... I am glad that you like the poem ... Thank you so much ...

Jan Allison July 7, 2019 at 2:22 PM a fabulous take on the contest theme probir many congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs jan xx Probir Gupta July 8, 2019 at 12:42 AM Thank you, Jan ...

Kim Rodrigues July 7, 2019 at 11:56 AM Wonderful thought! Congratulations! Probir Gupta July 7, 2019 at 12:00 PM Thank you ...

Janice Canerdy July 7, 2019 at 10:05 AM CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Probir! Janice Probir Gupta July 7, 2019 at 11:05 AM Thank you, Janice ...

Winged Warrior July 7, 2019 at 10:00 AM Congrats!! Probir my friend...lovely universal verse...sending love...^WW^ Probir Gupta July 7, 2019 at 11:07 AM Thank you, Warrior ...

Eve Roper July 7, 2019 at 9:33 AM wonderful and well thought verse, Probir, the stars are so beautiful and mysterious …. congratulations on a 1st place win... Hugs Eve Probir Gupta July 7, 2019 at 11:08 AM Thank you, Eve ... Love ...

Line Gauthier July 7, 2019 at 9:28 AM Lovely poem, Probir. Congrats on your gold medal win. Probir Gupta July 7, 2019 at 11:08 AM Thank you, Line ...