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I Am a Blue Marble With White Spirals

While writing this at night I felt someone watching me from above I looked up and met stars Stars and still stars and stars again Millions and millions of miles away over there Seated at that twinkling window Are you too writing poetry like me Can you give me a starry line from your enthralling sway I am a blue marble with white spirals Dated July 3, 2019 The Universe Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nina Parmenter

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/21/2020 5:31:00 PM

Hello Probir Gupta, writng poetry under the stars oh how nice that would be. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Susan Jeavons

Date: 7/28/2019 1:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Probir! Blessings, Susan

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/29/2019 8:54:00 AM

Thank you, Susan ...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/8/2019 9:22:00 AM

Sublime penning Probir, you have brilliantly captured the "awe", congratulations for your fine first place finish, gorgeous work. xomo

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/8/2019 10:16:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen ...

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/8/2019 2:29:00 AM

Probir congrats on your win! And an excellent win it was!;)

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/8/2019 10:19:00 AM

Aah ... itmeenan ... a beautiful Urdu word ... satisfaction ... Thank you so much ...

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/8/2019 12:16:00 AM

Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you!

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/8/2019 12:33:00 AM

Thank you ...

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/7/2019 6:21:00 PM

Your ethereal imagery enthralled me and is truly breathtaking. I so enjoyed the vast imagination of your beautiful musings, Probir. Congratulations on your excellent and inspiring trophy win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/8/2019 12:36:00 AM

So encouraging your comments are, Susan ... Thank you so much ... Glad that you liked it ...