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I Am a 8

We come alone, and alone we depart,
This journey compels us to play our part.
Come now, no one stays for eternity's span,
We come alone, and alone we depart.

How can the moon conceal its glow?
He stands first and last, this truth we know.
We come alone, and alone we depart,
This journey compels us to play our part.

Copyright 20/9/14
form written for a contest.
path no: 8
destiny no: 8

Copyright © Ma Yaseen | Year Posted 2014

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Tim Smith Date: 10/5/2014 2:44:00 PM Congrats Malik on the win....cheers Tim Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/4/2014 8:46:00 AM Congratulations on your win Malik Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/4/2014 7:31:00 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Malik:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/4/2014 6:31:00 AM Congrats on the win, nice write, Malik Login to Reply Ma Yaseen Date: 10/4/2014 7:13:00 AM Thanks Dr. Mehta

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/4/2014 2:24:00 AM I really love the theme of your poem. It was just line two that repeated at the end that was strange for me. congratulations in my contest. You wrote a very nice triolet. Love the imagery of the moon hiding under chiffon! Login to Reply Ma Yaseen Date: 10/4/2014 3:10:00 AM well thanks for liking the theme and imagery Dear Andrea, you are so kind.... I cannot understand how the line was strange to you, Can you please elucidate it a bit?// Malik

Paul Callus Date: 9/28/2014 7:50:00 AM Ahhh so you have a double 8, Malik! Is that supposed to be lucky?! Enjoyed your triolet....deep and intriguing. gl in the contest. // paul Login to Reply Ma Yaseen Date: 9/28/2014 11:05:00 PM Yeah I never knew it, Now I know and feel like being lucky. Thanks Paul for your time and the kind words.. God bless you. Malik

J.W. Earnings Date: 9/27/2014 12:17:00 AM Awesome poem. Wow, a simple poem, but a profound, great message. Login to Reply Ma Yaseen Date: 9/28/2014 2:50:00 AM thanks for dropping by,David.... Keep visiting,,, God bless you

Kelly Deschler Date: 9/25/2014 12:52:00 AM Eventually, every beginning has to meet it's end, and we all have to learn to except that.... I enjoyed this deep and soulful write. Great work, Malik! Good luck in Andrea's contest! Login to Reply Ma Yaseen Date: 9/25/2014 1:41:00 AM Many many thanks for your remarkable words,, Stay blessed

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 9/24/2014 9:32:00 PM Nice Triolet Malik. Good luck on the contest. Login to Reply Ma Yaseen Date: 9/24/2014 11:02:00 PM thanks Brenda for stopping by and for the comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2014 9:24:00 AM - My "lucky numbers are 8" - A lovely write to the contest, Malik! - I wish you luck and hope you win - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Ma Yaseen Date: 9/24/2014 11:01:00 PM Wow, that is great, i have not considered any number yet, Thanks for your visit Anne always.

Darlene Gifford Date: 9/23/2014 12:13:00 AM I, too, shake your hand on this poem well written. Good luck in the contest, I enjoyed reading your triolet. Login to Reply Ma Yaseen Date: 9/23/2014 12:15:00 AM woo, then good if you too are 8,,, thanks for your time and the wishes...

Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/21/2014 8:26:00 AM such a beautiful vision painted wxcellent Login to Reply Ma Yaseen Date: 9/21/2014 11:33:00 PM Thanks Liam for your visit

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/21/2014 8:04:00 AM A beautiful poem and a fine read, thank you. Login to Reply Ma Yaseen Date: 9/21/2014 11:33:00 PM Thanks a lot Mr. Maurice

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/21/2014 4:13:00 AM Have no idea what a Triolet is, for that reason only on the content I am ready to comment which I find deep and thought provoking! Beautiful, my friend Malik! Good luck with the contest! Login to Reply Ma Yaseen Date: 9/21/2014 4:40:00 AM thanks Sir for your appreciating words..

Jan Allison Date: 9/20/2014 10:00:00 AM lovely triolet Malik good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Ma Yaseen Date: 9/21/2014 2:05:00 AM Thanks Jan for stopping by. god bless you.

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/20/2014 8:04:00 AM Perfectly done triolet. You have to write your date of birth and month if it is for the contest. Please give once over to the rules of the contest. Login to Reply Ma Yaseen Date: 9/21/2014 2:04:00 AM thanks sir for stooping by and a nice comment, I have mentioned it there, is it like if i edited it here, it will automatically get edited there?? i dint know about this, if you can help me out here?