I Am

I am but an entity in a vast universe,
human in form, of female persuasion
I breathe, I walk, I run and I talk
of my skin I guess label: Caucasian

I wear a few flaws upon my form
though to some they aren’t seen as such
My attitude much depends on yours
though kindness may ignore verbal punch

I try to treat my fellow human friends
in a way that I’d like to be treated
but I’ll not become someone’s doormat
of this, a warning… not repeated

Brown of hair with two matching eyes
…though at my age grey hairs shine through
Mother of two, grandmother of nine
Great-grandmother of more than a few

I am an accumulation of many things
from birth to this point in my life
I’ve welcomed growth within myself
riddled with life’s conflict and strife

Of the spirit within there’s much to blend
with living challenges thrown in the mix
yet still I’m a soul with infinite life 
that’s constantly in need of love’s fix 

I am a unique and complex gal
labeled and numbered in my world
but none of these can define who I am
I’m still a bloom not completely unfurled

And…In this life I answer to Debra 
 
© Debra Squyres
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Deschler Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 6:03 PM
I admire those who can go through the hard times and still love freely with an open heart... This poem was very nicely rhymed with a smooth flow. Great work, Brenda. I really enjoyed it! Congrats on your win!
Gorelick Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 2:25 PM
I love the last line..yes we bloom until the very last. Wonderful work. BG
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 10:24 AM
I love your poem, Debra! Congrats on your wonderful win!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Mandani Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 3:35 PM
We all write poetry but man, we are all so different. You have a very healthy opinion of yourself. A very positive outlook. I like the way you brought your poem to end.
Hamilton Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 6:45 AM
I really like this poem Debra great take congrats on win hugs
Allison Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 1:30 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Debra:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dunn Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Well Debra, nice to get to know you better I love your ending, and the humanity that makes you so unique, I love the differences in our species it makes all of us special in our own way, good luck in the contest my friend, cheri
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 4:18 PM
Love the way you tackled this contest Debra - I adore the final stanza and the imagery of the bloom:-) Hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 3:05 PM
I love the way you attacked this challenge.
Gorelick Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 2:43 PM
Very nice, the last stanza is just great. BG
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