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I Am I am grass I wonder if the wind will blow I hear someones foot steps I imagine swaying in the breeze I Am grass I understand when it rains I grow I want to feel the drops all over me I worry that some day I might dry up I cry when I think of that day I Am grass I say " Come, Sit, Enjoy Me" I dream under the stars I try to look my best- Green, Inviting I hope for sunny days- Spring showers- Flowers I Am grass

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Date: 6/10/2011 12:39:00 AM
That's good. You take on the personifcation of the grass and what it wants to give. But what happens when it comes time to mow? Or are you just left to go to seed? Are you cared for? Are you nurtured. An abundance of rain can make you grow tall but care and loving can make you beautiful and strong. Life is giving and giving is life. To me, that is what you portrayed here and I thank you for making me think. Well done.
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Date: 11/24/2010 10:41:00 AM
Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Patricia. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 10:54:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Patricia. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2010 1:48:00 PM
Kudos to a young poet! Tam, I've never given a thought to the inviting green grasses that decorates our earth. You said it all - their needs, their feelings, their experiences, their plights. It was well personified. Welcome to poetrysoup!
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Date: 11/21/2010 4:31:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme...hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. as u enjoy a Happy Thanksgiving with luv..
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Date: 11/20/2010 6:35:00 PM
wow like this piece here my friend thank you fir sharing and welcome to the soup
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