I Am

Ponder me - I'm the best poetic expression, my father had wrote. Awful me - I'm the depth of calmness, an eye of storm shows. Fearful me - I'm the lord of darkness, residing beneath the light. Cheerful me - I'm the light of lightness, children adore to hug. Joyful me - I'm the pleasure of a new born, when motherly angel nears. Wishful me - I'm the wise of the wisest, like showering grace of sun. Colourful me - I'm the blush of the rose, picked and worn in romance. Tearful me - I'm the cry of the heaven, drowning the earth of hope. Blissful me - I'm the minute of the minutest, allowed to wander in this world. Humble me falling into the pit of ignorance Boasting myself, for impressions in distant hearts. Third Place in I AM: A LIST BIO CHALLENGE Poetry Contest sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/30/2020 11:32:00 AM

I enjoyed your creative entry Jenish . It is nice to get to know you better. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/31/2020 2:17:00 AM

Thank you Connie for that delightful comment.. God bless you..

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/29/2020 8:52:00 AM

Beautiful poetic lines, Jenish. Well done.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/29/2020 11:00:00 PM

Thank you Line..

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/26/2020 2:52:00 PM

Wow Jenish! I feel honoured to know you after reading such a beautiful poetry about yourself. Definitely your muse is coloured in your multiple shades. This is beautiful my friend. Congratulations on your win :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/27/2020 10:59:00 AM

Thank you for your delightful words.. Takecare..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2020 10:10:00 PM

This was a very creative style you used for your bio poem, Jenish. Your lines sing with poetry. Congrats in my contest.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/25/2020 11:46:00 PM

Thank you for that wonderful contest Andrea..And thanks a lot for my kind placement..Takecare always..

Juliet Ligon

Date: 5/2/2020 8:31:00 PM

Nice format. Great to learn these pieces of you.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/2/2020 11:53:00 PM

Thank you Juliet..

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/30/2020 11:29:00 PM

You are EXCELLENT.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/1/2020 12:23:00 AM

Thank you Anisha..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 4/30/2020 4:38:00 AM

Clever you ...... You am sure to get a win with this great list bio ... Good luck in the contest Jenish

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/30/2020 7:29:00 AM

Lol..Thank you for your support always..Takecare Shirley..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/28/2020 1:46:00 PM

This is excellent Jenish--very articulate--a winning poem for me.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/29/2020 10:39:00 AM

Thank your Vijay.. I made some changes, to make it acceptable.. Takecare always..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/28/2020 1:29:00 PM

This is so well-penned. Great contest entry! ~ I'm the biggest narcissist I know

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/29/2020 10:38:00 AM

lol.. You are not.. You are one of the modest funny poet I ever met.. Thank you Gershon..

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/28/2020 12:20:00 PM

Creative list of adjectives, cleverly defining who you are, Jenish. Different from the other entries I've read; check Soup Mail.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/29/2020 10:35:00 AM

Thank you Reason.. Definitely, you are a reason if I get a placement in this contest..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/28/2020 9:15:00 AM

You have given me so many reasons to appreciate you even more dearest JENISH, I repeat Jenish , haha ...with the unfolding of your being. God bless you my friend. Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/29/2020 10:33:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your support.. God bless you always..