I Adore Your Body Odor

The whole path to home was filled with incense                                                                                            It has indulged my every sense

It has hit my senses to rose                                                                                                                              It was not the fragrance of the rose

It was not the smell of lavender                                                                                                                          Nor the scintillating smell of sandal powder!

On the way I found no flower                                                                                                                         Rather not found any blower!

It remained firmly along the way,                                                                                                                             As you had just walked away!

Ultimately I saw you, as splendor                                                                                                            Objectively, I adore your body odor!




Above poem is from adapted from the eBook “FIRE WITHOUT  FIRE IS ETERNAL! AND OTHER POEMS ON HAPPY LOVE ” by Mr.V.Muthu manickam. Copyright is held by V.Muthu manickam. Tweet him at : @mpvmuthu5.
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Allison Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 7:24 AM
A fragrant poem - i prefer to think of it as her 'scent' rather than her body odour:-) Hugs Jan xx
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April 26, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Thanks. It is both. It was penned out of own experience. You may see more interesting poems in the times to dawn. @mpvmuthu5
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