I Adore U

baby i adore u... u are my light when i am stumbling through the night. Blind and without sight. Naked into this world like a newborn baby. u came forth to clothe me... Protect me with ya arms wrapped around my body. long and slender like the branches on a willow tree. u are the sustenance i require to breathe...to live... somehow our relationship is like a barter. together we borrow....from each others sorrow. its like we are one...underneath his only son...u are my sun. nurturing me and allowing me to grow...take away my sunshine and i'd have no life anymore. u tell me i’m all u’ve wanted and more. u only wish u can crawl inside my heart and explore... the true emotions that lie within...i force them to stay in. for i fear if i let them completely roam free...u’d become afraid of me. knowing me entirely...leaves no room for u to grow to know me. but u are my equivalent, parallel in mind, body and spirit... purely heaven sent...

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Skat A

Date: 7/25/2016 12:36:00 AM

Tia enjoyed reading your poem today. ,Thank you for sharing your words. Hope to see you post again.... *SKAT*

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/19/2009 6:10:00 AM

A beautiful song of thanksgiving from a big heart of a poem, I wish I was that baby still. Love

Tia Jackson

Date: 3/15/2009 5:56:00 PM

Thanks to you both Jessica and Deneith....I really appreciate the comments.

Jay Loveless

Date: 3/13/2009 11:41:00 AM

sorry for the 'she' in my rush to not get in trouble [[im in school lol]] i didnt look at your name or even realize if you were a he or a she lol either way this is beautiful x)

Jay Loveless

Date: 3/13/2009 11:32:00 AM

This is an absolutly adorible poem. Your 'baby' is lucky to have you. She must love this, because it shows truly how you care for her. What she means to you. I love this feeling though some times it scares me, but many times i think back and see that im only here, i only made it through certain points in life, because of my babii. Good luck, lovely write. ~Jese xD PS this is deffinatly a keeper

Not Anymore

Date: 3/13/2009 11:10:00 AM

That is a keeper. I like it for its originality in the language. The "ya arms," part I think is the smoothest part of the poem. Your use of the ... is effective also. Great Job!