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I look right I look left I perceive nobody I move away You look up You look down You sight nothing You walk away I take a step You take a step We see each other We move straight You glance into my eyes I stare at yours We get lost Nobody spots us again

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Date: 9/7/2018 12:19:00 PM
A most wonderful write! You have the gift, my friend! All the best to you. Pandita
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Abhishek Kumar
Date: 9/8/2018 4:36:00 AM
Thanks for your motivational comment
Date: 6/15/2018 8:10:00 AM
:) cute poem !! well written , thanks for sharing !
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Abhishek Kumar
Date: 6/15/2018 11:56:00 PM
Good to see that you liked it..

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