I Went For a Walk Today

I met Death today With tears within my eyes No way forward and no way back This life I now despise. No. I didn’t wish to die today But I didn’t wish to live In roaring silence all alone, An empty tank. Nothing left to give. So, I fought with Death today Thoughts that wouldn’t go away Yesterday, tomorrow, the next day too Each unease begins to weigh. ************* I went for a walk today Ten thousand steps within my mind No sense of how the day would end Nor what to leave behind. ************* A pointed search to live today To find a grasp to hang on by The faintest glow to light the way A pursuit for courage to apply. The haves I’ve had and not the nots’ A subtle promise to a friend Life’s pleasures that result in smiles Loved ones’ milestones to attend. ************* I went for a walk today Down a raging river towards its end A crumbling bank on water’s edge One misplaced step to just descend. ************* Yes, I met with Death today And yes, he’d come for me Yet ev’ry single troubled thought And Death, today, Didn’t quite agree. Yes, I met with Death today, And I know we’ll meet again My war to wait for natures time There’ll be other battles until then.

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Date: 2/7/2022 6:15:00 AM
Wow. A misstep and wham. How's it been my friend? It seems as we progress through life the more we realize that life is very fragile. Everyday rise and fight for breath is a day blessed. Take it easy and enjoy the scenery along the journey. Blessings
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Mark Woods
Date: 3/1/2022 1:51:00 AM
Hello friend. I'm still struggling to write decent poetry. Plenty of false starts and wrong steps though
Date: 1/4/2022 5:07:00 AM
An excellent write. I am no stranger to Death either. He haunts me in my darkest hours. He holds no fear for me but my will is still my own. I’m a fellow Kiwi. As you can see Sam Hunt is a favourite of mine.
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Date: 1/4/2022 9:55:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup Craig. I've popped in and out for a few years and it is a good community. Looking forward to reading some of your work
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