I O U


I’m forever in your debt, m’lady
This me confess openly:
I offer U 
every pulmonary part
of this obsidian heart

O beautiful Ivory mare,
I love when you graze upon me
with those pretty olive eyes
As your bright yellow ponytail hair
shimmers in the vale breeze

I confess willingly,
I’m in your debt eternally, m’lady love
Your brave maiden rescue — 
Galloping deliverance 
from a brokenheart solitude
It t’was celestial revival approved

For this saving grace,
‘I do’ offer you
every pulsating part
of my obsidian heart

I owe you
every aorta praise prairie thing
That a lonesome Appaloosa can steppe sing
M’lady, let me kiss your 
heroine horseshoe 

O beautiful filly, Ivory!
I just want to thank you on bending knee 
For listening bosom intently
to my verdant vow, passionate plea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/25/2019 6:28:00 PM
This was simply lovely. Magical words, a command of romance... Ann
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Date: 12/22/2019 9:39:00 AM
Freddie you have a romantic soul. even if it is for a horse.
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Date: 12/19/2019 2:38:00 PM
WoW! Freddie, You sure know how to write "romantic" poems. It was sooo good that I didn't want the " ooh la la" to end. Well done my dear friend. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/19/2019 2:31:00 PM
Every pulmonary part of my bloody Jewish heart enjoyed this Romanticism, Freddie! Merry merriment, Gershon
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Date: 12/19/2019 6:52:00 AM
Sweetly done! " let me kiss your heroine horseshoe "
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Date: 12/19/2019 4:56:00 AM
So unique is your rendition of a beautiful soul acknowledging a deep feeling of gratitude and debt to a human soul the heart rises in love with! So wonderful and sweet to read your poetry, Freddie! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 12/18/2019 4:33:00 PM
I like the romance that flows. Well done. Thanks for sharing Freddie
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Date: 12/18/2019 12:00:00 PM
Very romantic lines Freddie, well written. Tom
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