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I’m forever in your debt, m’lady This me confess openly: I offer U every pulmonary part of this obsidian heart O beautiful Ivory mare, I love when you graze upon me with those pretty olive eyes As your bright yellow ponytail hair shimmers in the vale breeze I confess willingly, I’m in your debt eternally, m’lady love Your brave maiden rescue — Galloping deliverance from a brokenheart solitude It t’was celestial revival approved For this saving grace, ‘I do’ offer you every pulsating part of my obsidian heart I owe you every aorta praise prairie thing That a lonesome Appaloosa can steppe sing M’lady, let me kiss your heroine horseshoe O beautiful filly, Ivory! I just want to thank you on bending knee For listening bosom intently to my verdant vow, passionate plea

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Date: 12/25/2019 6:28:00 PM
This was simply lovely. Magical words, a command of romance... Ann
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Date: 12/22/2019 9:39:00 AM
Freddie you have a romantic soul. even if it is for a horse.
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Date: 12/19/2019 2:38:00 PM
WoW! Freddie, You sure know how to write "romantic" poems. It was sooo good that I didn't want the " ooh la la" to end. Well done my dear friend. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/19/2019 2:31:00 PM
Every pulmonary part of my bloody Jewish heart enjoyed this Romanticism, Freddie! Merry merriment, Gershon
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Date: 12/19/2019 6:52:00 AM
Sweetly done! " let me kiss your heroine horseshoe "
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Date: 12/19/2019 4:56:00 AM
So unique is your rendition of a beautiful soul acknowledging a deep feeling of gratitude and debt to a human soul the heart rises in love with! So wonderful and sweet to read your poetry, Freddie! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 12/18/2019 4:33:00 PM
I like the romance that flows. Well done. Thanks for sharing Freddie
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Date: 12/18/2019 12:00:00 PM
Very romantic lines Freddie, well written. Tom
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