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This Limerick on my Tombstone I wish to be read

Include my Name, Birth and Death dates I said

         Now it's time to reminisce

         Cause if you're reading this

Then it's quite obvious I must be dead!

                  Ralph Taylor - RIP (Really Into Poetry)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smalling Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 4:11 AM
Not quite yet, dear chap. Since you wrote this and not from the grave, else I the reader must have crossed Styx wave. Love it.
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:52 AM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
Wilson Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 6:34 PM
very funny and to the point! congratulations! take care~Deb
Falotico Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 1:49 PM
So much fun this winner. Crongrats my friend
Brown Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 10:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest Ralph. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 8:55 AM
Congrats Ralph on your big win in Andrea's cool contest with this awesome epitaph my friend.. enjoy your win today with luv...
Richards Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 8:42 AM
I love that last bit.....R I P !!! So clever!!! Congratulations, Ralph on your win!!! :) Carrie
Horsman Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Excellent Ralph, love this limerick, congrats on your win in the contest. Harry
Devonshire Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 6:38 AM
Another great limerick from you! Congratulations, Ralph. I love the poem, especially the way you interpreted RIP at the end. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 5:21 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Ralph
Neels Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 1:45 AM
hehe, this one made me smile Ralph, congratulations on your win ;) Wilma
Shetley Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 10:47 PM
very cute epitaph, congrats on the contest!
K. Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 9:33 PM
very witty, Ralph :) & I love what your RIP stood for-- way to go on your win-- congrats Ralph :) --nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 9:21 PM
Ralph, Congratulations on your number six place in my contest. I especially loved the last line, which was a geat punch line for your limerick and the RIP was awesome!
Roberts Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 9:12 PM
good one Ralph,, congrats on the well deserved win
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 2:59 PM
Hey, I never stopped yet to tell you, you did a nice job in my contest. I need to give my results right away. But I feel so tired, I just want to take a nap and not face all the process one needs to go thru just to post results here on the contests!
Buggs Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 6:36 PM
enjoyed reading today!! Well done!!
Brown Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 12:03 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Ralph. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Reyna Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 11:12 AM
cool. Kind of scary when i read "I must be dead" i thought it's your suicidal letter but then when i read the meaning of RIP. lol. cool
Mehta Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 6:08 AM
Very funny write as an epitaph, Ralph
Roberts Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 8:00 PM
good entry for the contest, best of luck
A   Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 7:53 PM
oi! sad but such a good entry! Enjoyed your poem, good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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