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Hysteria Uncontrolled


My gorge rises, my blood boils.
Exasperated I bite my envenomed tongue.
Incensed I spout mad words
that have no meaning
defending my attitude,
maintain my poise.
I bait, fret and nag,
like a tantalizing volcano
that has yet to decide
whether to erupt or not.
Don't answer me back,
Twill only fan the flames
of my irritable ire.
For if I erupt, then 
there is no going back.
Don't goad me into a quarrel,
my lava burns.
So beware.

She leaves never to return.
Good.
After all what is she?
A lazy domestic cleaner 
that performs half the work assigned
And get paid in full for it.

My wife smiles.
She’s glad the cleaner is gone for good.
She is too sexy for comfort.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 11/26/2021 4:37:00 AM
You wife may be releasing a sigh of relief ! First of all your maid doesn't satisfy her needs. Besides she is too sexy ! Interesting write, Victor !
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Date: 10/6/2021 4:52:00 PM
A lazy housemaid doesn’t deserve to be paid, worse still is if she’s dressed to kill. An entertaining read Victor… Belle
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Date: 10/6/2021 3:11:00 AM
Lol! Victor, If my maid( If I could afford one) looked that she wouldn't have gotten hired in the first place:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/5/2021 2:07:00 PM
lol I've seen of few people like that. The ones who coast by at work on their looks without doing much work. The good part is they don't last long. They are soon found out for what they are and are sent packing. Loved this. Thanks bunches. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/5/2021 10:41:00 AM
If the maid was doing half the work and getting paid in full, it's no wonder there is such anger! An engaging and cute verse. Hugs, Evelyn :D
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Date: 10/5/2021 6:28:00 AM
I can see from the photo--her posture says she won't return. A bit of jealous vibes towards the end.
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Date: 10/5/2021 4:03:00 AM
Brilliant! :)
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Date: 10/5/2021 3:47:00 AM
Cute one. I wonder if you could find a mature one who could really clean? I like your thoughts penned in this one. Your visits to my page are always welcomed. Sara
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Date: 10/5/2021 3:22:00 AM
Love the pic…I’m sure your wife is looking on and says, “no, no, no!” Enjoyed!
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Date: 10/5/2021 2:25:00 AM
Great twist in the end, Victor, enjoyed:)
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Date: 10/5/2021 2:17:00 AM
Are cleaners ever appreciated? enjoyed this offering Victor...Delice
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Date: 10/5/2021 12:12:00 AM
Enjoyed the humour Victor, I don't mind a bit of dust, send her to me lol. Tom
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Date: 10/4/2021 10:49:00 PM
How wonderful it is that your kindness and the kindness of your Wife (RIP) combined with your fiery temper, allowed you to move on and forget about the cleaning girl's shoddy work. I liked your last line: She is too sexy for comfort.
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Date: 10/4/2021 10:39:00 PM
A very clever poem that made me smile, xoxo
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