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Hypoxian Love

Tell me: why is it that when you left, it became harder for me to breathe? As if where you went, the oxygen followed, certainly as bewitched by you as I. The air here seeming thinner; my lungs somehow weaker; as if compressed by the weight of my heart.

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Date: 9/3/2024 6:06:00 AM
A vivid portrayal of how love can affect both heart and breath, Frank
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