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Hypnotizing Moon

Through tree framed lacy silhouettes flows the summer moon’s silvery fair lair As lovers gaze and dream of soft lit kisses yet met in delight, her poetry written to capture and snare forged blaze of passions burning, fevered eyes she casts her spell silently over the cerulean dark of light shrouded black cover hear the ravens’ soulful cries when holding your desires, become naked in her lit night Hold the divine lust against your wanting supple lips unfurl into her body, shyly glance into her molten rock of her golden wine, dare you to drink the wanton sips then surrender the rusted keys that open your willing lock The altar laid with perfumed petals, brooding red rose candles burning behind your hypnotized veiled sight You give the goddess your life with abandoned repose lost in the night, in love bound by her mystical lyrical light 7-30-2020

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Date: 8/4/2020 3:28:00 PM
so metaphorical and wondrous. Congrats on your win!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/4/2020 10:12:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...I think I'm in love with that silvery light
Date: 8/4/2020 6:20:00 AM
Beautiful. We have far more in common with the sun and moon than all that meets the eyes -- and the temperature of one's flesh. The heavens are also ourselves. Great read! To dwell upon them...to write about them...is to travel more deeply into the nature of our own being.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/4/2020 10:12:00 PM
so true Joe! :D
Date: 8/1/2020 7:16:00 AM
The moon is always a great inspiration for poets and it has inspired you well Jeanne Hope you have a lovely weekend Tom
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/4/2020 10:13:00 PM
The full moon in August is one of my favorites...it has been a lovely week. Hope for you too :D
Date: 7/31/2020 5:04:00 PM
...dra...cula...a moonlight character who said ....'look....into mine eyes' : ) .....stan sand
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/4/2020 10:14:00 PM
Hey Stan...I always look over my shoulder on a full moon...you never know! lol

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