Hypnotizing

Sometimes I get lost into your smile,
as beautiful as auroras at seven
in the evening; I never want to be found
by anyone or any memories that will distract
me from your gaze.

Your skin glows like the Arabian Desert
in the sunset,
when the sunrise rays filter through the curtains,
bathing your body.

Your voice makes adrenaline in my veins
to rise like a tide in a tropical afternoon,
whenever you speak, laugh, or giggle,
especially whispering sweet nothings
to my ears.

Your body feels so good to caress,
as we cuddle the whole night,
right in front of a bonfire.....

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Date: 5/11/2017 2:23:00 PM
very tactile, teddy.. a lovely poem!..huggs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/15/2017 8:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Nette, for enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 5/10/2017 1:02:00 PM
A very warm and romantic poem, Teddy. Very tenderly written. // Barry
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/11/2017 3:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Barry, for enjoying my piece!! ;-)
Date: 5/9/2017 2:59:00 AM
A beautiful romantic poem Teddy, i like the feel and mood of it.. :-)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/11/2017 3:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lewis. You're too kind!! ;-)
Date: 5/5/2017 4:21:00 AM
WoW! Teddy, I found this well written write to be beautiful, sensual and romantic. A without a doubt seven. :-) Alexis
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/7/2017 2:19:00 AM
Hi Alexis. Thank you so much for your kind comment!! *^_^*
Date: 5/3/2017 9:00:00 AM
A beautiful and romantic write Teddy..
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Date: 5/7/2017 2:17:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph!! :-)
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