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Hypnotising Harm

Navigating center my sail in the wind waves pulsing by only left to rescind Discovering land rich and bare feet on the sand sun stripping cares Heating the skin warmth can trace Lillie’s and roses all over my face Tide creeping in laps at my feet slowly it rises till we both meet Seahorses twirling around the seabed seagulls are laughing their wings outspread Carried away on a swell of joy embracing the peace pain cannot destroy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/17/2009 3:03:00 PM
This piece really begins well and takes you right there. It does the job of setting you up immediately in a time and a moment. Nicely worked. Thank you for your comments on my entry in the contest. I do appreciate them very much. Regards, GK
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Date: 6/13/2009 11:40:00 AM
I really like this poem. Good job!!
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