Audrey Haick Poet Dodoitsu

Hypnotic Wells

An over crowded ball room
eyes lock and slowly reaching
oblivious to others
once lost worlds collide

Hypnotic wells smoldering
hold on 'fore deeply falling 
one breath away flying high
deep desire fire burns

~*~

Note: For Michael's "Spicy" Dodoitsu (Ladies) Contest 
By    : Audrey Carey

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Joe Inka February 10, 2011 at 4:33 PM Nice portrait of the moment of impact and the ensuing passion.

Debbie Guzzi January 24, 2011 at 1:50 PM Hey there girlfreind where are you finding these wells to plumb? Hmmmm Hope all is well and you are keeping warm. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick January 3, 2011 at 12:57 PM Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Your presence at my work lifed my spirits high..Sara

Eamon Duffin January 3, 2011 at 12:50 PM Hi Audrey. Thanks for the visit and your kind message. Best of luck with this xxx rated work. Eamon

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2011 at 11:58 PM Reminds me of WEst Side story when time stands still in the dance hall and it's just those two. Very nice! Luv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire January 1, 2011 at 10:37 AM Just the right amount of "spice" in this romantic poem, Dimples. The first time you lay eyes upon that special someone, truly "losst worlds collide." Just how I felt when I met my late husband. Wishing you huge success with this awesome write, dear. Love, Carolyn

Jancarl Campi January 1, 2011 at 6:56 AM I like this one. It is quite romantic. Good luck in the contest and thanks for your comment on my poem "we" Have a great 2011, and Happy New Year, Jancarl

Nette Onclaud January 1, 2011 at 1:43 AM romace at its best, audrey.. best wishes in the contest! huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta December 31, 2010 at 5:55 PM beautiful imagery you have created to express spicy sentiments, Audrey. Good luck in the contest,

Lynette Chachere December 31, 2010 at 4:11 PM oooh(: don't you just love when that happens. love at first sight, locking eyes from across the room, beautiful. i hope your new year is worth a new beginning, Audrey. ~Always&Forever Lynette