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Hypnotic Wells

An over crowded ball room eyes lock and slowly reaching oblivious to others once lost worlds collide Hypnotic wells smoldering hold on 'fore deeply falling one breath away flying high deep desire fire burns ~*~ Note: For Michael's "Spicy" Dodoitsu (Ladies) Contest By : Audrey Carey

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Joe Inka

Date: 2/10/2011 4:33:00 PM

Nice portrait of the moment of impact and the ensuing passion.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/24/2011 1:50:00 PM

Hey there girlfreind where are you finding these wells to plumb? Hmmmm Hope all is well and you are keeping warm. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2011 12:57:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Your presence at my work lifed my spirits high..Sara

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/3/2011 12:50:00 PM

Hi Audrey. Thanks for the visit and your kind message. Best of luck with this xxx rated work. Eamon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2011 11:58:00 PM

Reminds me of WEst Side story when time stands still in the dance hall and it's just those two. Very nice! Luv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/1/2011 10:37:00 AM

Just the right amount of "spice" in this romantic poem, Dimples. The first time you lay eyes upon that special someone, truly "losst worlds collide." Just how I felt when I met my late husband. Wishing you huge success with this awesome write, dear. Love, Carolyn

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/1/2011 6:56:00 AM

I like this one. It is quite romantic. Good luck in the contest and thanks for your comment on my poem "we" Have a great 2011, and Happy New Year, Jancarl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/1/2011 1:43:00 AM

romace at its best, audrey.. best wishes in the contest! huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/31/2010 5:55:00 PM

beautiful imagery you have created to express spicy sentiments, Audrey. Good luck in the contest,

Lynette Chachere

Date: 12/31/2010 4:11:00 PM

oooh(: don't you just love when that happens. love at first sight, locking eyes from across the room, beautiful. i hope your new year is worth a new beginning, Audrey. ~Always&Forever Lynette