Hypnotic Twilight

hearing magenta
through eyes fixed on evening’s song…
             rhapsody of stars

           ~~12 Feb 2017~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 9:49 PM
lovely ~
Thomas Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 6:01 PM
You truly know how to paint a beautiful picture David :)
La France Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 1:57 PM
David congratulations on your win in my contest with this nice write
Onclaud Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 8:41 AM
ohh, descriptive 'ku with a greeat end line, david.. huggs
Gupta Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 11:47 PM
Great ! ... Beautiful haiku...
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