Hypnotic and Deep

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               I inherited a magnificent antique natural black diamond ring,
it is an impure crystal from Central Africa, it is entirely opaque;
     a precious gem, absolutely beautiful and quite valuable,
a mesmerizing color created by nature, it touches my very soul.
          It inspires me with it's hypnotic quality taking me deep,
and I see it's power in my accessories, always black and sensual;
                the black diamond is mysterious and shrouded in drama.
many a death has been cast by a particular black diamond stone.

               I did research and found out-  a famous black diamond,
was pried from the eye of a statue in a sacred shrine temple;
     in Pondicherry, India by a travelling monk thief, so the myth says,
the theft created a cursed diamond called the Eye of Brahama.
          The myth then states that the diamond caused three deaths,
people would throw themselves off high buildings by suicide;
             later the diamond was cut into three breaking the curse,
of course, my ring is not one of the pieces, yet is still lovely.

               The days I wear my ring and my lovely black accessories,
I transcend this world, my makeup and hair become magical;
     seeing the world with my third eye and it is so very amazing,
I am a different girl-   dark, sensual, and so very mysterious.
          And when I take off the black ring and accessories,
a mere girl stands in front of the mirror, natural and glowing;
          the magic is gone but the inner peace remains and inspires,
I think what we put on our bodies should have a soul- 
                                                                   hypnotic and deep.

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August 3, 2016

Poetry/Narrative/Hypnotic and Deep
Copyright Protected, ID 16-813-746-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


For the contest, Black Diamond
sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/16/2016 8:04:00 AM
Congrats on first place well deserved, I love the ring, great poem x
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Date: 8/16/2016 6:29:00 AM
Congrats BW, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/13/2016 1:28:00 PM
Congrats!!! Wings...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/13/2016 11:56:00 AM
Great Win!
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Date: 8/13/2016 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot with this wonderful write, Constance:)
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Date: 8/13/2016 3:23:00 AM
Broken Wings, congrats on your top placement! well deserved lady :)-luloo
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Date: 8/13/2016 12:38:00 AM
You went all out with this poem, Constance. REally getting into the theme! Congrats on your fantastic win. i had a great day. The movie Indignant. it's really good. Also I shopped for wigs. I've got it narrowed down to five!
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Date: 8/12/2016 8:05:00 PM
Hi Constance, just dropping by to congratulste you on the first place in the contest, much desaerved Constance. Another seven for an excellent write. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/12/2016 6:17:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on the first placement of the contest
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Date: 8/12/2016 5:34:00 PM
congrats on the win , great imagination stephen
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Date: 8/12/2016 4:24:00 PM
Congrats on the win! Beautiful piece of writing.
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Date: 8/12/2016 4:23:00 PM
That's quite beautiful, B. W. -- but, are you not afraid of the curse? ;-) Congrats on a true # 1 win.
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Date: 8/12/2016 3:49:00 PM
Many congrats Constance - never take that ring off my beautiful mysterious friend - a fabulous take on the theme :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/12/2016 3:29:00 PM
Hi BW, I really enjoy your poetry. It's deep and comes from a beautiful soul. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/7/2016 5:06:00 PM
Hi Constance, i agree with Tj, you are a special lady and a beautiful soul and it is an honour to know you. Your poetry is special for it comes from deep within the soul itself. You live your poetry and we who read get the chance to live it too. This piece is hypnotic and deep as you are hypnotic and deep. This is a definite seven and a fave. An excellent write once again Constance. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/3/2016 6:00:00 PM
I loved this write, you had me at hypnotic.
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Date: 8/3/2016 3:24:00 PM
Very informative read, Constance. If I were a gambling man, I'd bet that all of that bling distracts from your good looks. But if it makes you feel good, that's all that matters. Loved the read. Good luck in contest.
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Date: 8/3/2016 2:32:00 PM
Interesting write, did you mean sacred line 2 second stanza?
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