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Hypertension

Lacing up my zipper-tooth fingers      once gripped by reciprocal exaltation, I breeze through familiar rudiments with firm self-involvement      in dire contrast with the pink penance of compassion, until my eyes swell-up from focusing on the sea of apathetic decisions all      heaped upon by conscience and the nobler elements of my psyche. Murmurs build urgency with tapping      force, each shove propelling blood and code onward to assail faults in such global perjury.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/21/2009 6:51:00 AM
Great depth with this piece, so well penned! Thank you for stopping by to comment on my work, much appreciated!
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Date: 4/17/2009 2:45:00 AM
Compelling and I love your structures...Raul
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Date: 4/15/2009 3:41:00 PM
Captivating poem, John. Many memorable phrases and images. My favorite is "the sea of apathetic decisions all heaped upon by conscience and the nobler elements of my psyche." Very intriguing!
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Date: 4/15/2009 10:58:00 AM
Nicely constructed! - darkpoet
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