Hypertension

Lacing up my zipper-tooth fingers
     once gripped by reciprocal
exaltation, I breeze through familiar
rudiments with firm self-involvement
     in dire contrast with the pink
penance of compassion, until my
eyes swell-up from focusing

on the sea of apathetic decisions all
     heaped upon by conscience
and the nobler elements of my psyche.
Murmurs build urgency with tapping
     force, each shove propelling
blood and code onward to assail
faults in such global perjury.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 6:51 AM
Great depth with this piece, so well penned! Thank you for stopping by to comment on my work, much appreciated!
Moreno Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 2:45 AM
Compelling and I love your structures...Raul
Devonshire Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 3:41 PM
Captivating poem, John. Many memorable phrases and images. My favorite is "the sea of apathetic decisions all heaped upon by conscience and the nobler elements of my psyche." Very intriguing!
Orozco Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 10:58 AM
Nicely constructed! - darkpoet
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