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Hyperbole

. This jaunt me myself and I did experience the fire works the dancing we did for five straight days daze the food and red the exotic women filled mine bed The smile on my face this jaunt in the poets head

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/21/2009 3:05:00 PM

Hi James, glad to see you back online gifting us with delightful verse again! I really got into this poem, the romance, passion and fireworks. But then you put a "smile on mine face" by telling us t was all in the "poet's head." You had me going. I thought you were off on an exotic vacation. Love you, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/21/2009 1:21:00 PM

Sounds like you had five days of fun in your poetic dreams. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/18/2009 3:11:00 PM

Good James you're turning very naughty in your dreams..sweet write James,dancin, fire works and exotic women,this write of yours made me smile:)excellent creation in verses--Charma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/18/2009 5:06:00 AM

LOL ok now silly one get up and go get a gal!!! Light & Love